Open Poetry #19 |
upon my sleeve |
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
We’ve woken from the dream mid dance this love forever what I leave you here upon my sleeve it remains you are still my poetry |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Just make sure it is stitched on tight...a soft, tender write, Duncan... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Duncan - soft and lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Duncan my oh my, this is so charming. floria Floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As it should be Duncan, very beautifully said... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
We’ve woken from the dream mid dance ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Gee don't ya just hate when this happens? Just kidding Duncan....this is so tenderly penned. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever sing poetry to your heart and dance with you for all eternity! (big hugggsssss) we all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
My poet you will always be In thoughts that echo silently In moonbeams shining on the sky There is no rhyme or reason why The dream that hovers in the stars Though fleeting, once that dream was ours And when I see a star above Remember wishing it for love In winter keeping flames afire Of love once climbing ever higher And should you ever think of me I hope there is a smile to see Thank you Duncan. I hope you don’t mind, but it brought back my stubborn, silent muse for a moment. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you are still my poetry" Cowboy you keep making me cry (I love this) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan, I love the last two lines So sweet.. you can always make me smile Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You are still my poetry"...really like this line...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this love forever what I leave you here upon my sleeve ====================== you are still my poetry ====================== *swooning here* and then *sighing* at Tracys very appropriate reply.. and then... *smiling at the both of you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love written in poetry never dies. And it never lies. Even if it falls apart, it is still beating in the heart. And I am still hugging both hearts. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Duncan~ Lovely, and I agree with everyone the last two lines are so tender....be well...Peace Lauren~ Greeneyes~ |
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