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quietwaters
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0 posted 2002-03-16 09:22 AM


Your Smile

Your smile is the unseen sun in the blueness
of sky; the dance of the dreams I hug until
waking, the gentle lullaby of my sleep when
it is not peopled with dragons. It is
the sparkle of the day on the crest
of a beaching wave, the jealous sheen on a
leaf glinting off a dewdrop falling
to thirsty ground.
Ah, your smile teases my soul like the threat
of rain hovering over my bare-headed afternoons,
like a pressing reminder of needing people
between my yearning cold and your warmth;
otherwise cherished, but far and stranger now --
and only because your smile calls me closer still,
even as it grows farther with the passing years.

[This message has been edited by quietwaters (03-16-2002 12:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-16 09:27 AM



Cheese!


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-16 11:27 AM


You have such nice vision...It would be a pleasure to take your picture and have you say "cheese"

*s

M

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3 posted 2002-03-16 03:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is a picture perfect vision of a smile, now, CHEESE!!! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ree, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-03-16 08:32 PM


wow!!! really great imagery in here... this one should be read aloud!

i enjoyed this very much!

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