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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-03-15 07:29 PM

YOU

beautifully vivacious
warm woven silk
treasured softness
deeply loved

radiant, vibrant
whispered love
delicate kisses

Life’s greatest wonder
Rare Treasure

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-03-15 07:30 PM

Y E S!!!

I love this....wonderful!!

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-03-15 07:31 PM

Beautiful, Barry *s

M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-15 07:33 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, may she forever be the loveliest gift of your heart and forever fill you with pure loves treasure! (big hugggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-15 07:39 PM

...Perfect Barry!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-03-15 07:43 PM

Oh yes, Oh yes, you win. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2002-03-15 07:43 PM

barry,
this was beautiful! you just put mine
to shame though lol...wonderful writing!

take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-03-15 07:56 PM

Lovely Barry..as always i enjoyed

~Vic

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2002-03-15 08:34 PM

Magnus - this is excellent. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-03-15 08:35 PM

Delicate...

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2002-03-15 08:37 PM

*sighs* such lovely thoughts!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-03-15 09:16 PM

Magnus darling boy this is utterly wonderful this has got to be one of you utter utter best. Truly the line and flow in this is absolutely excellent.

YOU are a very good writer and this proves it. Less is more Keth keeps telling me, and you do these 20 or less so well, it shows me what she means

Absolutely wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-03-16 04:09 PM

You seem to be able to say a lot in few words! Nice one.
Sandra

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

13 posted 2002-03-16 04:41 PM

Hello Barry

Such a stunning description of someone very special in your life. Absolutely beautiful!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

14 posted 2002-03-16 04:59 PM

That about covers it!

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

15 posted 2002-03-16 08:34 PM

ahhhhh to be admired and adored like this!!! how lovely!!!!!

she is one lucky lady!!

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

16 posted 2002-03-16 08:42 PM

Perfect description of "Her".

((Magnus))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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