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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-03-15 04:57 PM

Seems a whisper doesn't even come
when I want to speak.
These eyes don't see the bright things
when so much absence creates
irrational anger.
Lips, eyes, fingers
glued.
Who will pry them open?
Pen, words, poetry
dry
a state determined by necessity.
There is no torture more bleak
than knowing of presence
and pretending absence
and having to freeze my pen
for all the eyes that would
blaze its creations
into monster deeds of their own creation.

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-03-15 05:02 PM

There is no torture more bleak
than knowing of presence
and pretending absence
and having to freeze my pen
for all the eyes that would
blaze its creations
into monster deeds of their own creation

misunderstanding the words of another or the need for another to express those words only isolated and seperates the two...and does not forge bonds but chains

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-03-15 08:21 PM

Silence speaks volumes
for the audience and the librarian...
Your style is unique and glorious. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-15 08:32 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Jenn, this poem feels a little sad, I hope now your heart whispers with the comfort of all you desire and now your heart sings with rapture and hope always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!