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Style/Mind Flames/Love In Anger (3-twenty words or less poems)
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Style/Mind Flames/Love In Anger (3-twenty words or less poems) |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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Style goosenecked stretching you caught my gaze I caught your swoon How can eyes: robin egg blue Burn with such a Flaming Red? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - empty in repose wick waiting to be lit match head about to be struck my mind ignited passion burns ~ slowly ~ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - only you take me to world's edge a grievous touch You Loved Me In Anger Now Take me in excitation! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
oh i love these jeff...nicely done...i especially liked the first  ..hugs..  ~Victoria~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Gosh Jeff, you make it seems effortless!  Way to go!! Three, twenty or less! WoW! Hugs. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ShadowRider...These are great twenty word poems. You certainly captured the essence of the challenge!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect! |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Jeff Hi there it’s Krissy (Mushy’s daughter) this is wonderful writing. Mum told me to watch out for your writing saying it was excellent, she’s right it is. Wonderful writing. Well done, I haven’t tried a twenty or less yet but I might. These are very good poems   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhh...these are wonderful, sweet friend, I am soooooo impressed, you write these so so well, your words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) we all love you so much, sweet friend, these are superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderfully done Jeff, your work has style and grace, you're not just a pretty face. Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Vic! Oh Myyyyyyyyy gawrrrrsh! Didn't mean to make you hhhot! Just meant to. . . uh. . .stimulate the brain cells a bit. Thankx so much, mon ami, for rescuing my poem(s) from an early death! hehehe Nance: Hey gal, from the basketball capital of the world. Why bake one pie, when three will do?? *s* You really think this was a Success? Cooooool! I really need to concentrate on my short poetry. I just feel guilty if I don't write at least 2 paragraphs or so. Have a wonderful Sunday, and take care! Ivy Rose. . .how could a rose be any sweeter than an Ivy Rose? *grin* I tried, Rose! Gave it my best shot! Thanks for the approval notice! Sunshine! So nice of you to say that! Far from perfect, but hopefully at least interesting! Krissy, this response just floored me. Made me feel worthwhile; kind of like when a favorite teacher finally recognizes your work on a project and claps you on the back with a smile! Your unexpected reply was one of the single most satisfying responses I have ever had! Someday I hope to repay the kind favor. Be well, Krissy, and your poetry is wonderful, full of depth! Keep at it! You are full of talent! Evening Noah! How goes it this fine day for you? Once again, your generosity in replying and reading so many poems is flattering and admirable! You are the type of person that makes a forum tick, Noah! Thank you Buddy! Kethry. . .I guess it's a good thing you can't see the Red Face behind the screen after your reply! nudge Normally, I think, I take some ribbing from folks for giving them a headache from deciphering the poems! hahaha Thank you. . .from the bottom of my heart! Thankx Y'all! and come back again! Jeff |
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