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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-03-15 01:53 AM



My Duet (with myself!)
By Larry Chadwick


I’m so beside myself,
I could write a duet.
In fact I think I am,
It will be no sweat.

I suppose you think it,
Is as easy as all that.
I’ll bet it won’t blend,
And that’s a fact.

They’ll look at the verses,
And dissect each one.
Trying to figure out,
Which one I had done.

That should be obvious,
You stupid little twit.
Look at them yourself,
Everyone is full of it!

March 14, 2002


Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-03-15 06:40 AM


doing a duet with yourself wasn't so hard was it...think I may have to try that someday...you do cause one to ~smile~

M

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2 posted 2002-03-15 08:05 AM


Larry darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful writing. As always your words are filled with a certain quality that is unique to you. The two yous did an excellent job I can’t see the join at all. A perfect blending of your voices.

You do indeed always bring a smile darling boy


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Nan
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3 posted 2002-03-15 08:10 AM


Larry, don't look now, but you're talking to yourself.. Hmm.. Making sense too...
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-03-15 08:37 AM


Larry C,
Enjoyed both of you.

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-03-15 09:00 AM


Larry, what fun!

You talk with two of you
Tell you what I'll try to do
What I have so much in me
How can I dump without three?

Me, myself and I
Will now give this a try
Let's see, me, whee!
I'm just a bag of wee glee!

Myself, I look; I seem okay
Why should I complain, today
I love myself just like I am
Even when I smell like Spam.

But when I say my words, I
Seem to hog the verbs, I
Never listen much to you
Sad but true, 'tis what I do.

Me, myself and I.

Thanks for the exercise in muttering to myself. I think the two of you do better, though.  

((Larry))
-newell  






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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher


[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-15-2002 09:02 AM).]

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6 posted 2002-03-15 09:35 AM


Larry(both of you), enjoyed this with a smile and coffee this morning. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-03-15 10:02 AM


Larry~

LOL ok they can give you something for that... is this due to a lack of sleep??? oh dear lord what am I saying?? I do this all the time..... you fill the pages with humor....thanks


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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8 posted 2002-03-15 11:39 AM


I like you twice as much now. Breakfast fun buns x 2.
  

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9 posted 2002-03-15 11:41 AM


HAHAHAHAH talking to yourself hey? Loved this one it made me big time, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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10 posted 2002-03-15 12:54 PM


LOL I had a hard time trying to tell which was which. Thank you for the laugh and the great read!

Live today as if it's your last.  Love today as if it's your first.   Lisa

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11 posted 2002-03-15 02:06 PM


Off the wall, Larry!  Love the idea of this and you actually pulled it off quite well.
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12 posted 2002-03-15 02:21 PM


Larry, you're as crazy as I am!
Allow me to introduce myselves to you....
~Hugs, Nancy Lee & Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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13 posted 2002-03-15 03:20 PM


Larry you made me smile. Good one.
Sandra

Larry C
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14 posted 2002-03-15 10:29 PM


M,
And putting a smile on your face is one of my favorite things to do! Thanks.

Mushy,
How does one add smiles to your always smiling face? Thanks.

Nan,
Scary huh?! LOL Thanks.

Sy,
We are so thrilled! Thanks.

newell,
Excellent dude! LOL Thanks as well.

Larry C
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15 posted 2002-03-15 10:33 PM


Chris,
We should have had coffee too! Well maybe not. LOL Thanks.

Lauren,
It's a night owl problem! ROTFLMAO Thanks.

Kacy,
Would you like...never mind! Thanks.

floria,
Smiles...one of my favorite things to make! Thanks.

Carolina,
It turned out better than we thought. LOL Thanks.

Larry C
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16 posted 2002-03-15 10:36 PM


Duncan,
You should be scared! But thanks.

Nancy,
Don't tell...but I've know Nancy Lee! LOL Thanks you two.

Sandra,
I love your smiles! Thanks.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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17 posted 2002-03-16 04:58 PM


Hello Larry

What a classic!  I love reading your humourous poems as I can see we have a very similar sense of humour.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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18 posted 2002-03-16 06:32 PM


Nawwww,  you didn't....surely you didn't??

Nice Larry C.  You always add a little bit
of humor to our day!!

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19 posted 2002-03-16 08:39 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, and now I would like to introduce to you me, myself, and I, me, myself, and I, this is Larry, himself, and him! Charmed! (smiles) This is soooooo cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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20 posted 2002-03-16 08:41 PM


LOL!!

too funny

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21 posted 2002-03-16 08:44 PM


Larry, you prove duality is do-able....and comical too! *s
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22 posted 2002-03-16 11:38 PM


Larry, Larry, Larry,
oh excuse me, make that Larry, Larry, what can I tell you? I enjoyed your little duet. I'd do one too, but I'm not speaking to me today.

Nan

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23 posted 2002-03-17 01:31 AM


Sue,
Is it too late to be worried about those similarities? Okay then...ruuuun for you life! BTW, thanks.

Magnus,
I wouldn't...but I was forced. It was that or a breakup! Couldn't let that happen.

Noah,
Nice to meet yourself and you and I or somebody. Anyway it is nice thanks.

dor,
Too funny. How did that happen? Don't stay up late it is not a safe thsing to do. Thanks.

chansondegeste,
Quality is doable. But only if you are committed. LOL Thanks.

Hey Nan,
Don't be ignoring yourself. That sucks. So bring it on lets put this abttle to rest. Okay. Thank.

Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy

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