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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-03-15 04:14 PM

I feel your spirit floating in the trees
windspering words on lines of greenest leaf
your branches shade my heart and guide my way
to inspirations my soul waits to find

I lay beside your trunk of brownest life
hearing the stories of your seed's thin rings
they speak in voices of their time to me
telling me of their lives lived more than once

and as the sun sets now in skies of blue
I find that time has passed before my eyes
my life now written on those lines of leaf
my story now part of those rings so thin

speaking now to the seed of my own soul
windspering the words of eternity

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-03-15 04:20 PM

Oh my, this is deep. Eternity speaks in the voices of the trees. Nicely done.

Nan

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-03-15 04:47 PM

Oh the title just drew me in on this one. What a fantastic original idea, Windspering..lovely sven, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-03-15 04:50 PM

lovely, Sven...

~Tier

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-03-15 07:36 PM

Sven~

Oh wow dear friend, this is ever so deep and makes one think....great job here....

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-16-2002 12:33 AM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-03-15 07:40 PM

Excellent Sven, how well we compare to the
growth of a tree, the rings, the leaves...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-03-15 07:40 PM

windspering..I just love when we as poets, make up new words...we should have our own passions dictionary..don't you think *s

M

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2002-03-15 07:42 PM

john,

wow!! i have to come back later and
read this one again...for it was very
deep and intense but i can tell you
just from first glance, i like it
very very much...exceptional writing
my dear friend!

love ya.
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-03-15 07:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the tree in your heart forever grow with true love and may the rings forever weave memories of happiness to you forever and ever! (big hugggsssss) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-03-15 08:09 PM

Windspering...I could wrap this word around me....IWIHTOI....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2002-03-16 12:20 PM

Really nice Sven...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2002-03-16 12:25 PM

I like this very much, Sven. *S* I couldn't pass up such a title... thank goodness. *S*

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

12 posted 2002-03-16 12:34 PM

I lay beside your trunk of brownest life
hearing the stories of your seed's thin rings
they speak in voices of their time to me
telling me of their lives lived more than once

Sven - The title and the poem were both very good.

Dave

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2002-03-16 11:48 PM

Thank you all my friends. . . it's nice when the mind can come up with words that speak. . . and when people can feel them. . .

thank you all. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

14 posted 2002-03-25 02:32 PM

Beautifully done from the tip of the Sven Pen.

loved this..and today I suppose I'm in the mood for your poetry. Geesh..I haven't been responding and so I couldn't continue to neglect one of my favorite poets could I?

and umm..excuse me..but do you have a license to make up your own words, Sir?

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

15 posted 2002-03-25 03:43 PM

Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands {sigh}

That is beautiful!
You've outdone yourself my friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2002-03-25 03:53 PM

i love it sven..beautifully penned..and one of my favorites...I truly enjoyed hugs

~Victoria~

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

17 posted 2002-03-26 03:25 PM

thank you again my friends. . . it's nice to see that you have enjoyed this. . .

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