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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-03-26 12:05 PM

If courage means a strong desire to live
in the form of readiness to die
then my love is courageous.
With vision it creates,
with faith it proves,
with fear it resists
the loss of heart.

If heart practices old experiences
as the mind learns new ones,
then by instinct, not only reason,
does my heart beat so for you.
Yearning, burning desire to live
before the chance to die, with a tear,
the dew of compassion.

If compassion is showing the
best part of a good man's life,
all the little nameless, unremembered
acts of kindness,
then allow me to be merciless
as I cultivate, seed, and nurture
the strongest of bonds, love.

And if to love someone is eternal
then let us inhale the bittersweet fragrance of chaos,
travel the twisted path of unrest,
fulfill each expectations of the other,
and, hand in hand,
create a world that others may reach
but are unable to touch.

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2002-03-26 12:11 PM

And if to love someone is eternal
then let us inhale the bittersweet fragrance of chaos,
travel the twisted path of unrest,
fulfill each expectations of the other,
and, hand in hand,
create a world that others may reach
but are unable to touch.''

you know you amaze me, each time you write...this is more then exceptional...I keep this, to read again and again....too many great, grand lines...but the above is so...WOW thanks Craig...for sharing this...

HUGGSSSS

Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-26-2002 12:11 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-26 12:14 PM

(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friedn, such compassion always flows from your heart and lights these pages with warmth and faith in loves purity! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2002-03-26 12:18 PM

Wow, Craig. This is really wonderful. I ditto Lauren's comments.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2002-03-26 09:56 AM

This is a wonderful write..and such lovely thoughts..enjoyed very much

~Victoria

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2002-03-26 12:35 PM

Very heart touching, Craig. Beautiful.
Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-03-26 02:58 PM

Craig, good to see you again...and YES...
this is exceptional poetry!!!!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2002-03-26 04:56 PM

'inhale the bittersweet fragrance of chaos'-that is a great line. This poem is full of great lines. I enjoyed it.

Nan

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