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Mr. Right Now
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Mr. Right Now |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
She used to fall in love so easily she was every con man’s prey innocent but worldly wise liberated but fey So she's not looking for Mr. Right she's just looking for Mr. right now Her idea of a lover’s commitment doesn’t include a lover’s vow Burned too many times by lust she thought was meant as love reaching out to grab a hand only to get an empty glove Mr. Right may exist somewhere but she won’t pursue that dream she’s learned a lesson from her past use ‘em and lose ‘em is now her scheme [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (03-25-2002 05:54 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'm sure Mr Right Exist somewhere... and I am sure once found all the mistakes will seem a lot less important.. Nice message and a nice poem. I enjoyed |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sharon, I understand this completely. I feel exactly like this. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetdeVine~ Love the play on words here~ Quite cleverly done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is soooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, I too know that eventually she will find Mr. Right too, for as long as she believes in herself and her dreams, she can never go wrong and he will always be behind that corner for her! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo powerfully expressed! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
PdV, So...does that make you Miss NotYet? And one more thing, I saw you the other day!  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for your kind words!!! And Larry, I don't think so!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Use 'em and lose 'em... *grins* no comment on that! Very good write on something that happens so often... Used to be me... Thanks for the look back into my past! Zu is my hero |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
except for the last line, that is why I married her |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I thought I met Mr. Right once... Unfortunately he was out for dinner with Mrs. Right and all the children...  Well said verse, PdV... Indeed.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done DeVine. . . this one has many emotions attached to it. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this PDV...fun and payback! Thanks for the chuckles...kinda relevant though, isn't it? jwesley |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey, I am so glad I found this... You know what?... I seem to know Mr. Whatever... I can relate! They are beautiful though... Keep your chin up my friend. ThisDiamond |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
For a moment, i was torn between the meaning of Mr. Right or Mr. Right, happening to occur Now but i guess, if a person can't find either, the answer is moot. *s* Still, a penetrating you write of: an analysis of dealing with, justification of, and enjoying an attitude change. ~nods at your work~ tSR |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great philosophy, PDV.....and great poem too!  ~hugs~copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
AMEN SISTER!!! R. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I had a chuckle with this one. Love'em and leave'em? A bit cynical, but perhaps a necessary element of survival after having been on the other side of that line more than once.  for a right good write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this... very much. *S* (Enjoyed Nan's response too... ouch! *G*) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, this agrees with me very well. Sandra |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful play on words Sharon .... this is excellent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Pip Member
since 2001-09-14
Posts 59 |
Great idea for a write, Sharon. But I thought I'd point out a quick tripperupper...*grins* "Mr. Right may be exist somewhere" Trips me every time. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind replies and thank you Pip for finding my mistake and pointing it out!!! I fixed it!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Better now than never I say! Loved that analogy about an empty glove! Fun poem!!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto the sentiments, and loved the play on words here, well done! ~* Reality is an illusion ~ albeit a persistant one *~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yeppers, I think I will print this and tape it on my bedroom wall........rofg........great write pvd |
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