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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
*Not sure if this is a repost..can't keep track..lol You come to me in darkness So very like a dream Or nightmare, if you please Where everything is wrong I sense it to my core You hover out of sight But, never out of mind Malicious tendencies, you gnaw Feeding on the barren ovaries of my spirit's tears You flood my senses with bloody mist Am I posessed? [obsessed? undressed?] By this pernicious tunnel vision When all I see is Red. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well, if it is a repost, i'm glad you reposted it because i missed it the first time around... this is a really great piece! Lots of good imagery and filled with emotion... i loved it!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Morcastlin, Enjoyed the read. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Morcastlin, This reads like a perfect description of the rape of a soul. Wow! What scary images. ((Morcastlin)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
ahhhhh-looks like a bit of the psycho lives in you as well(refers to my poem posted -good morning psycho) good imagery post some more and bring the heat |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Ah, something a man will never know, that being a woman...well done... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn...that was intense! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
About Decaflame's comment, "Ah, something a man will never know, that being a woman...well done..." And your words, "Feeding on the barren ovaries of my spirit's tears" tells me that there is something very deep here which I missed in my first reading. A built in craving-to-death to "create" or "give birth", perhaps? Me thinks that maybe this is a "Spirit of Woman" thing related to my thinking that God is indeed "She" as well as "He". And there are many thoughts that the "Spirit of Man" of the God "He" in man are completely blind to. And likewise, the "God(dess)" in "She" is deaf to many thoughts of the God in "He". Is it any wonder that man and women cannot, have never and will never understand each other. Women understand women and men understand men but pairing a man with a woman may work in the flesh but seems doomed in the understanding in a soul. Just a few thoughts. Or more accurately questions? Or am I way off track, here? ((Morcastlin)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Bonnie, I'm so sorry I missed this before until now, this is such a wonderful and powerful poema nd i think every now and then we can all indeed relate to this feeling of rage! (kiss on cheek) May we all find peace and hope through the anger and be comforted through all the fury, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Well Morc I dont care much if it is a repost or not, I truly love this. floria Floria |
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