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You'll Never Know |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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You'll Never KNow There is something in that nothing between us at all But, I just can't think of a more kinder place to fall Then when I take your face along when I dream Just something in that nothing that won't leave me be... In my heart I've replayed it at least a thousand times or so What's to set free when you're not even mine to let go The winds have changed and now I find myself at courage's door But, what right do I have to even be standing there for... Sometimes there is that once in a lifetime sunset in view I wish for that once in a lifetime chance to discover it with you You'll never know me at dawn still holding on from the night God, you'll just never know what I'm like... You see me like a river just gently passing through When this river only wants to touch a part of you And, like it's waters that run far into the sea You'll never know that graceful side of me... You'll never know what I'm like to get lost in your eyes You'll never know what I'm like to laugh so hard I cry You'll never know me secure and carefree to the breeze God, you'll just never know what you mean to me... I could have completed the night but you'll never know what I'm like Cause, you'll never know us face to face in candle light There is something in that nothing and in my kindest fall Truth is, You'll never know me at all... Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Saunni...lots of good lines...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Saunni, this is so very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, I feel that really no one in the world would ever know another 100%, though there will always be one true love that will understand you so very much, and the small differences that lie away on the graceful side of you that love may never fully understasnd is what makes lovers love each other even more. (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, your words are always sooooo honestly touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder if anyone really ever knows anyone else "in all"... The winds have changed and now I find myself at courage's door But, what right do I have to even be standing there for... You have every right...and I am watching you gain that courage hugss M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Saunni, True it's hard to really know someone, enjoyed the read. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sauni, you inspire me to write. A poem that you inspired is posted in a new thread, "Your stream". Hope you like it. ((Saunni)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (03-19-2002 09:25 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, this is so well done, so many great lines. And I relate so so much. They have both missed out on someting beautiful, that's all I can say. Sandra |
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Dunphy Member
since 2002-03-14
Posts 82Massachusetts USA |
i like ur poem iss pretty koo. wrigh some mo i like it. my e-mail iss [email protected] i enjoy readdin ur poem. luv kevin aka dunphy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, I agree. . . will we ever really know?? good questions Saunni, I hope that you find the answers. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Saunni...GREAT WORK!!!! This beautiful and extremely well-written. ***Ivy Rose |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Saunni, this is one of the most beautiful poem i've ever read...you have such a way with words that leaves them permanently branded in your readers hearts. just a stunning write my friend, full of such lovely emotions! take care. amy "you can't stop |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I could have completed the night but you'll never know what I'm like Cause, you'll never know us face to face in candle light There is something in that nothing and in my kindest fall Truth is, You'll never know me at all... This is outrageously beautiful writing, Saunni......thanks for sharing it. hugggssss copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Do we ever really know one another? Excellent write! Hugs, Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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