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Spooky House |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
There was a spooky house up on the hill. It was so creepy it gave me chills. It was framed by an iron gate. No one had been there as of late. My friends and I decided to go. What we would find we did not know. We waited until it got dark. And then we snuck across the park. We climbed over the top of the wall. Being very careful not to fall. We started to move towards the door. We were ready for adventure and more. All of a sudden a girl began to yell. We ran so fast and moved so well. At the door we pushed and it opened with ease. I was saying a prayer to God, oh please. We moved into the living room. The house seemed to be filled with gloom. We checked out the kitchen and the creaky doors. We checked out all of the bottom floor. We decided to go and climb the stairs. And see what we could scare. We found a masterbedroom on the right. It was definetly a creepy sight. We were looking all around. And then I yelled, here's something I found. It was a letter recieved from a man. Saying please, please understand. My dear I'm trying to get there to you. Try not to be down and blue. Please do not take another lover. Keep warm under the covers. Your kisses are embedded in my mind. And will be with me until the end of time. Then I found another letter. And this one didn't turn out much better. My darling I waited for you. There was only so much that I could do. Know that there was no one else. Know that I stayed by myself. I'm sorry I didn't make it to see you. I'm sorry I didn't make it through. Tomorrow will probably be my last breath. I'm sorry I didn't make it through this test. Know you're the only man I've ever loved. My one true love that I continously dreamed of. Peaches |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, this is such a wonderful poem but it has such a sad ending, I hope that this is fictional and two lovers didn't really have to experience this, this is heartaching! (kiss on cheek) You always tell stories so wonderfully, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah:Thank you my dear sweet friend  It is a fictional write.I am trying to go down different paths and explore different things.You always make me smile and I'm glad I've found a friend like you.  Peaches |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches, this was interesting...keep exploring...No harm in being creative! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Peaches, this is wonderful, even though it is fictional. For I believe that it was a reflection for someone's reality through your soul. And I do believe that all love in a heart, is somehow radiated into the air. And no matter where a spirit is the love always finds it's target through God's space. Please keep loving, searching, writing and sharing with us. ((Peaches)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus:Thank you, I'm glad it was interesting to you.I will keep trying.Thanks again friend SilverStreak:Thank you so much.You are a sweet person with a sweet soul.I always look forward to your comments. Peaches |
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