Open Poetry #19 |
Sensualities |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The hearing of the heart acute The feeling of the mind astute Merging with the senses in applaud Boiling to the surface forces thawed When the heart can hear the color of his thought When the skin remembers scents as not yet taught Merging into single consciousness of melody anew All the senses to attend in single follow-through Mirroring of language both the body and the mind Awareness of the nearness, images to be defined The self in compliment to flower in wild anticipate The dressing and the frosting as the entree we await Copyright Kkh 3/14/02 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That's quite a recipe! All of a sudden I'm hungry... A couple of very clever and beautiful lines here....... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do this very, very well... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love and passion always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May this magic forever shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so lovely..I really like the way you write poetry...and reply..thank you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm, very very nicely done! Enjoyed very much tonight. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like how you weave the meter and the sonnet like lines into this..making the senses speak for themselves..Bravo!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sensually delicious....I love the whole feel of this poem...Magnificent....A feast fit for the Gods of love....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I humbly thank you...I am learning ThisDiamond |
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