Open Poetry #19 |
A Spring to Winter - for Enchantress |
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Spring to Winter Somehow you believe I shall be in the Winter of your years ever born as Persephone and swiftly melt away your fears Tho I've not gifts of an eternal lass no fountain of youth from my lips spill oh see here in this looking glass the images of us as we are now, still Only in thine eyes, where might I live and there, in your heart, a desire that beats from whence my touch, what I might give is a blessing to your soul, complete Ah Spring, to rise the hope of all good men to see yet a spark in Winter's eyes ah poor Winter, swift melt away, and then… see as Persephone gives lift, and rise ~*~ 03.04.01 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! I have heard of the whole story of Deeter and Perspherone, how she met Hades and wanted to return home but Hades wanted to imprison her and the verdict was that every Autumn and Winter she would go to Hades when it gets cold outside and she would return to play in the spring and summer when everything blooms! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I just know Nancy is going to cherish this forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-14-2002 09:03 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea....this is a very beautiful poem... I know Nancy will thoroughly enjoy it.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Karilea!! What can I say? Thank you seems so inadequate...this is just so exquisitely beautiful! Your timing is impeccable as I really needed this one tonight! What a beautiful loving soul you have sunny one! I shall treasure this always, bringing it out to read to remind me......of Spring's promise. You always fill me with smiles and for this I say thank you!!! ~Hugs and Smiles, Nancy~ *Noah, thank you for filling me in on the story* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karilea, this is a beautiful and creative dedication. I love how you incorporated the greek myth with the seasons of life ~ they blend perfectly! This is clever and very sweet of you to write for her Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Karilea, this is very beautiful and thoughtful. I'm sure that Nancy is glowing right now in your Sunshine. Thanks for sharing your pretty bright rays with all of us. ((Karilea)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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