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Away From You
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Away from You AMK 3/14/02 I'd give everything I have to hold you once more These tears fall slowly on my pillow tonight I remember the warmth of your smile The feel of your sweet touch throughout the night Though we're only a part for a while It seems more like forever I cherish every single thing about you baby How I pray that we are soon together But in the depths of my soul and mind I know that you and I have a long way to go Though we love each other more than words can say We have many obstacles, this we both know When I close my eyes, I can hear your laugh I'm reminded of all that is good and true Forever captivated by your beauy and grace I am Always, is how long I will love you But this pain deep inside Is sometimes more than I can bear It's something that I bottle up inside Just too scared to let it out and share Away from you, I feel so lost and alone I hear your voice on the phone, but it's just not the same I know right now I sound pathetic and weak But what I wouldn't give to hear you speak my name I hold on tight knowing this love is worth it But sometimes I get scared for I can not see But then I remember what my Mom use to tell me... Whatever will be...will be. "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't mean they don't love you with all they have" [This message has been edited by Aimster (03-14-2002 11:40 AM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Yes, Aimster, your mother is right: But then I remember what my Mom use to tell me... Whatever will be...will be. But we can still always keep our scrapbook of memories. Nothing can take these away from us.  I love your poem. Thanks for sharing! ((Aimster)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart Oh what can I say I can feel the ache in this, the questions that your soul cries. This is so well written the feelings simply flow all through it. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly wonderful  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Amy, this is sooooo beautiful but sad, my heart goes out to you for I know these feelings ever so well too. I dream of seeing my love Joanan this summer, and I pray with all my heart she will be able to see me, but while I'm waiting for the answer, I feel kind of sad inside and every time I hear a Shakira song, it reminds me of her for me and her love her music so much and it reflects the love we have for each other that I wnat to come true. (kiss on cheek) I prauy with all my heart that whatever will be will fill you with loves happiness forever and ever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whatever will be...will be. ================================== you answered your own question... but then I knew you would.   heart-hugs Amy-girl. mothy me You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ I have done the long distance thing, and it worked out pretty darn good! I'm married to him now It will work out for you two as well very heart felt poem!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I hold on tight knowing this love is worth it But sometimes I get scared for I can not see But then I remember what my Mom use to tell me... Whatever will be...will be Amy, I'm kinda left speechless after reading this cuz your way of expressing yourself is soooooo beautiful it seemed2edge itz way strait in2 my heart... Hugz2uSweetie and I wish you much happiness... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-14-2002 12:23 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Miss Amy, this is achingly beautiful Hon.... But in the depths of my soul and mind I know that you and I have a long way to go Though we love each other more than words can say We have many obstacles, this we both know You know what they say...Love conquers all, including those obstacles and yup what will be will be!hugs sweetheart Maree |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Amy, "Away from you, I feel so lost and alone I hear your voice on the phone, but it's just not the same I know right now I sound pathetic and weak But what I wouldn't give to hear you speak my name" I would not call you pathetic and weak. You are in love  and that is a good thing, as hard as it can be at times. I can understand this well, as you know. It will all be worth the wait. Did I say you write beautifully? Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
too true Amy. . . too true. . . it's really nice to see you back again. . . and this is why. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your heartfelt replies. as always, you touch my heart. take care all of you and once again thank you very much! amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Amy, I liked this one a lot big sis! I hope you and Jena will always be this happy. You deserve it and have my vote. This was very beautiful writing but then again you writing always is. take care. I'll see you soon. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your feelings expressed so well...James |
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