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Open Poetry #19

Weak

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2002-03-14 06:39 PM

For Rhonda

Weak

If all the world could see just what you do to me,
If everyone could feel as weak down at the knees,
If all of them could find the beauty in your soul,
If any of them could see, without you I’m not whole,
If all of them would look they’d find a new you inside,
If they’d just understand they’d be no need to hide,
If all the world could see just what you do to me,
All of them would fall down and bow upon their knee.

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-03-14 07:15 PM

Oh Love... I dont' know what to say. Thank you so much

I totally wasn't expecting that. Sweetie, thank you! Another one to go on my wall! Thank you again!

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-03-14 08:23 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so sweet, dearest friened, I just know Rhonda will always love this and cherish this forever! (big huggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Andrew, thank you for sharing!