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0 posted 2002-03-14 02:27 PM




Persephone

~*~

first hint of spring mist
is in dew as it is kissed
in the break of light

~*~

whiff of scented breeze
serenades Persephone
trails along her skirt

~*~

shining sun sparkling
dancing fairies on dust motes
lyre strums golden dreams

~*~

she calls upon me
Persephone, sing to me
spring's sweet, soulful song

~*~

gilded lilies white
trail pathways airy and bright
velvet footpath light

~*~

Persephone loved
through persimmon knew the truth
spring births eternal

~*~

dedicated to Marsha
rededicated to Enchantress

01.06.01

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-14 02:34 PM


Truly very lovely!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

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2 posted 2002-03-14 02:49 PM


Such a sweet dedication. Very lovely!

((Sunshine))
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3 posted 2002-03-14 02:53 PM


beautiful dedication Sunshine. Chris

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4 posted 2002-03-14 04:24 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful dedication to our sweet Nancy and Marsha, sweet friend, I have heard the whole story of Perspherone and Demeter and it delights me to see spring coming back and filling the whole world with life and laughter! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so mcuh, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-03-14 04:58 PM


Now if that wasn't the prettiest picture in my mind so far today!
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6 posted 2002-03-14 06:00 PM


Beautiful work Sunshine. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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7 posted 2002-03-14 06:37 PM


Kari darling siter og my soul and keeper of dreams, YOU know I loved this when first I read it and I love it still. As I said before this is utterly outstanding, you are an absolute mistress at writing these wonderful and perfectly constructed poems. As always I love it, and you knew I was going to say that again.

You really are an excellent writer, always believe in yourself as I believe in you, continue to fly high darling girl you are an incredible poet

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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8 posted 2002-03-14 06:52 PM


Oh Karilea this is exquisite!  
Now I understand...oh yes!   
Thank you for rededicating
and posting this treasure
once more.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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