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Skyfire
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0 posted 2002-03-13 11:31 PM



Just leave me alone,
get it through your head;
I don't want to talk,
our friendship is dead.
You did the unspeakable,
hurt me the most;
I cannot forgive,
to me you're a ghost.
I was there through all,
your pain and your tears;
What do I get?
Nothing but jeers.
I asked for support,
but instead recieved none;
I will not harbor anger,
But neither will I remember the fun.
A venting poem, obviously. One of my "friends" just hurt me horribly. Andrew, don't get angry. He's not worth your anger, nor mine.

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-13 11:35 PM




(big huggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo sad, sweet friend, I'm sorry your friend treated you this way and I hope now all is alright! (kiss on cheek) Know you are surrounded by any that love you, sweet friend, we are always here if you need someone to talk to! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-13 11:36 PM


Nice expression of your feelings...James
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3 posted 2002-03-13 11:38 PM


Skyfire,

    Awwwww I'm sorry to see you hurt. I liked this, you expressed yourself well. Writing is a wonderful tool to vent isn't it?

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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4 posted 2002-03-13 11:39 PM


Rhonda,
Bummer. I promise I wouldn't do that a friend!

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5 posted 2002-03-13 11:40 PM


Arggggg doesn't that make you angry when someone let's you down?  Good you vented it, and I hope you feel better.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
  ~* Albert Einstein *~

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6 posted 2002-03-13 11:58 PM


its a shame when friends hurt each other..sometimes its better to find new ones if they keep doing it over and over again..hugss

           ~Victoria

                

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce


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7 posted 2002-03-14 05:10 AM


*hugs* It's always sad to see a friend dissapoint us or fall below our expectations but part of friendship is forgiving and sorting out problems. A true friend is not worth losing.

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

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8 posted 2002-03-14 04:40 PM


Good vent, I hope he knows that he messed up a good thing!
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-03-14 05:17 PM


Sky....
As was said, a good vent. It's so very good to get it out of your system... Pukka, my dear. You know I am always here.

~ Titus

Will I ever forget what happened today?

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10 posted 2002-03-14 05:51 PM


Skyfire, I'm sorry. I am glad you are able to write and express yourself, it does help. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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11 posted 2002-03-14 06:11 PM


Skyfire - Everything happens for a reason. Time will tell. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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12 posted 2002-03-14 07:10 PM


Thanks you guys for all the support and stuff. You don't know how much you all are appreciated.

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

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