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Forever's Tomorrow....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 And still she loved him Her heart just couldn’t let go There was still so much She wanted him to know In her eyes were the whispers Beginnings of poetry overflow Visions of her soul Softly in shimmer glow Words not of wisdom (At least she didn’t think so) Her voicing came from inner spirit Lives lived once upon a long ago Late in the night….. listen You can hear her sing faint and low Offering to his subconscious Memories echo And still she loved him Through tears and sorrow And she would love him until, Forever’s tomorrow ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (03-14-2002 12:21 AM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan,  I don't know what to say that I haven't already said in my replies a hundred times... I enjoyed, as always Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of promises of love always makes me smile, may true love like this forever fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
oooooo, i like this one. Well Done! -Dave |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - Those memories sure do echo. Your writing never disappoints. Nicely done. Dave |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Forever’s tomorrow Now how romantic was this poem on a scale from 1 to 10, well about an 11 I think Susan. This is a real keeper, I loved the entire of it. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Wow,, greatly said. wonderful write. I even have someone i think i will email this to... Bernie oh yea and the library tooooo... A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem with us I really enjoyed the read and i loved the imagery that you managed to cpature with your words Andrew "The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful flow Sea...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have had to build you a new box, my dear, for the treasures you keep penning...the old box is chock full of keepers... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Beautiful thoughts flowing from your pen~ 'Memories echo' Yes ... over and over again~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Late in the night….. listen You can hear her sing faint and low Offering to his subconscious Memories echo I have done this many times. Thanks, SEA. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A love that's true is indeed until 'forever's tomorrow'... Beautiful words, Susan.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes! For ever and ever ... So very well done Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Beautiful flow, beautiful write.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA as someone on here constantly remarks..your poems are getting better and better..a "look forward to" always to read. hugss M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tara~ you are soooo wonderful, thank you!! Noah~ thank you sweetie NCC~ thank you David~ wow, that is really nice of you to say, thank you Sharon~  thank youBernie~ that makes me smile like this  Zu~ thanks James~ Sunshine~ I only have about a dozen boxes of yours, thank you very much Marge~ thank you, thank you, thank you…… Cowboy ~ thank you Nan~ thank you very much Interloper~ thank youSeymour~ thank you! Maureen~ that is very nice , thank you Vandana~ always, thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In her eyes were the whispers Beginnings of poetry overflow Visions of her soul Softly in shimmer glow ================================== do ya hear the moth sighing? yes....you do  heres to nothing being left unspoken in rhyme of time. beautiful turn of phrase in this SEA-girlie. You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA, as usual your words warm my heart. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan, your writing shines like the gem you are...this is beautiful sweetie... full of so much love and beauty. i so enjoy reading your work and yet another one of your beautiful pieces goes into my library. *big smile* take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ you rock, thank you Chris~ thank you very much Amy~ I always love your poetry, thank you! |
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