Open Poetry #19 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
When the river Is so deep, I can't sleep whole night You kept me awaken When the night Is so cold you hold me tight When the song was written by you you always make me smile When you take my hand And sing these words for me I can't believe that you wanted to share this love with me When the time Is so right for us To be together When the love Is so true So true And It Is true When the love Is Enough to lift up our faith When the time Has given us so much When everything Is..... [This message has been edited by vandana (03-14-2002 10:05 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ 'When the song was written by you you always make me smile When you take my hand And sing these words for me I can't believe that you wanted to share this love with me' You've strummed my heartstrings with this piece~ It JUST EXACTLY the way I feel when my sweetheart sings to me~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever hold your everything close to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when the poem is read, and the reader finds that the poet has spoken to them, that is when the poem is life well done my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Lovely write, vandana! ((vandana)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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