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Tell me is this a limerick?
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Tell me is this a limerick? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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There once was a woman who madly took all of the men to heart gladly then she moved to the north threw her whole life off course and now reminisces quite sadly. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you and I pray that soon the love of your dreams will come to you and forever you will write limericks of the heart to the other end of the rainbow! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you as always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Of course it is a limerick dear, and I love limericks. This one was fun. floria Floria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sandra - take heart! If she moved far enough north...maybe Santa will make her smile. lol. Just wanting to make you grin. Loved this one. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Sandra, you write wonderful limericks. Reminds me of: There once was a man who loved grits He suffered from fried chicken fits His sweetheart more north so he had to go forrh When his stomach shrunk into the pits. Poor guy. ((Sandra)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep...that would be a limerick... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That's the limerick form, Sandra! Rhyming north and course is stretching it just a wee bit but your form is good  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Sandra it is a limerick, and a very good one I might add! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tis a limerick - and a cute one |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
It is a fair enough limerick alright, with a bit of off rhyme. I humbly offer this, to clean it up, and with appologies to the Scandinavians in the crowd: There once was a woman who madly took all of the men to heart gladly then moved in with a Norse threw her whole life off course and now reminisces quite sadly. Hee,Hee,Hee, I love limericks. S Arthur |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my...BRAVO!!! I love it....you did a magnificent job with it...I have never been able to write these but I sure love reading them and yours is top quality, Sandra...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Of course it's a limerick, and quite a good one too. Enjoyed it. Nan |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
There once was a moon o'er Catalina, That shone with quite a patina. Her spirit gave grace to this place, And always put a smile on my face. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Twas a first attempt, so I guess not so bad. Happy St. Pats day.(tomorrow) I am looking for something to celebrate. Anything! Green beer, anyone?? Sandra |
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