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amigo
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0 posted 2002-03-14 07:44 PM





Her velvety skin glistening
Just like silky satin sheets
Her clear beaded dewdrops
~ Subtly shimmering ~
Unleashed him -

Soft smiles surfaced.





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1 posted 2002-03-14 08:00 PM


mmmmmmmmmm
this is SO Beautiful!!!

Love it!

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2 posted 2002-03-14 08:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amigo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 2002-03-14 08:11 PM


This is beautifully worded. It tells the whole story, in meticulously chosen words. Excellently done!

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4 posted 2002-03-14 09:14 PM


Oh, yes....oh, yes
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5 posted 2002-03-14 09:17 PM


beautifully penned...the rose was a nice touch also..loved it

                ~Victoria

Larry C
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6 posted 2002-03-14 09:20 PM


amigo,
Nice picture you paint! Well done.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-03-14 10:04 PM



Very, very graceful....

Enchantress
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8 posted 2002-03-14 10:11 PM


...Exquisite!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nan
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9 posted 2002-03-14 10:18 PM


"Subtly shimmering".. for sure..

ecrivan
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10 posted 2002-03-14 10:36 PM


charming


amigo
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11 posted 2002-03-15 11:06 AM


Susan ~ Thank you SO much, dear one...

Noah ~ Thank you for your sweet words, my friend...

Rosemary ~ Nice to meet you...thanks for your lovely words...

Michael ~ Thank you, dear for stopping by and to you too

Victoria ~ Your words truly touch me...thank you...

amigo
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12 posted 2002-03-15 11:17 AM


Larry ~ Thank you for your nice words, Sir...

Karilea ~ Thank you, thank you...

Nancy ~ Is it??...thank you...

Nan ~ Thank you for your brightly shining presence here....

ecrivan ~ Thank you Sir...


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