Open Poetry #19 |
Graceful One.....(Twenty or less) |
amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Her velvety skin glistening Just like silky satin sheets Her clear beaded dewdrops ~ Subtly shimmering ~ Unleashed him - Soft smiles surfaced. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
mmmmmmmmmm this is SO Beautiful!!! Love it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo romantic, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amigo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is beautifully worded. It tells the whole story, in meticulously chosen words. Excellently done! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, yes....oh, yes |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully penned...the rose was a nice touch also..loved it ~Victoria |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amigo, Nice picture you paint! Well done. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very, very graceful.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Subtly shimmering".. for sure.. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
charming |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Susan ~ Thank you SO much, dear one... Noah ~ Thank you for your sweet words, my friend... Rosemary ~ Nice to meet you...thanks for your lovely words... Michael ~ Thank you, dear for stopping by and to you too Victoria ~ Your words truly touch me...thank you... |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Larry ~ Thank you for your nice words, Sir... Karilea ~ Thank you, thank you... Nancy ~ Is it??...thank you... Nan ~ Thank you for your brightly shining presence here.... ecrivan ~ Thank you Sir... |
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