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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-03-13 09:47 PM




Born free,
nature at its best
free grown,
raised, no interest,

freedom of choice
if I place a bet;
speaking freely,
I verbally select

free exchange: I can share my views
free domain: I can live where I choose
free offer: coupons included
free prize: gimmicks excluded?

free and easy
reduced to a crawl;
free for all
when everyone brawls.

free at last
accused is forgiven;
free to leave
your time was given.

born free,
I was put to the test;
free to die,
let me lay down to rest


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-13-2002 10:10 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-03-13 09:50 PM



Now this did not tax
you at all to write, did it...

very good!

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-03-13 09:54 PM


Awesome!
Liked that middle thing you got goin on
I will give this a dance! ThisDiamond

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-03-13 09:56 PM


Hello Lady in White!

Not at all in fact the cue was given through a question on the definitions we give to free
my student wanted to know if free can describe as well as be described and I said yes!


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-13-2002 09:57 PM).]

ecrivan
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4 posted 2002-03-13 10:01 PM


Diamond,

Turn it into a tune if you like


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5 posted 2002-03-13 10:25 PM




(smiles) WOW!!! This is what I call freedom of speech, sweet friend, your words freely flow with such wisdom and sincerity always! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-03-13 10:28 PM


freedom of choice!!..hehe, thanks Noah


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