navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Little La-La-La's
Open Poetry #19
Post A Reply Post New Topic Little La-La-La's Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-03-11 09:28 PM



Little La-La-La's

~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, she touched my la-la-la
smiling rosebud lips took me along
Bouncing off the heart of me
bursting into song~

In melody of sweetest notes
I now have a song to sing
The la-la-la ... of me
wafting from sheer joy that she brings~

Tucking the quilting hour
in soft rock of cradlesong
around this babe of my heart
Oh, I hope this night is long~

Sweetest song I've ever sung
fills the air with melodic delight
Delaney sleeps to Grandma's la-la-la's
gathering sheep long into the night~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
1 posted 2002-03-11 09:40 PM


Your words, loving words....flow like a torrent....

For Delaney has certainly captured your heart
and your poetic pen as well as your song...

A beautiful little child...I can see so
clearly your love....

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
2 posted 2002-03-11 09:42 PM


When I have insomnia, will you la-la-la to me too? Delaney is a cutie, and she looks as if she is getting ready to sing right back to you. Only maybe it'll be coo-coo-cooooo.
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2002-03-11 09:44 PM


Ahhh, such delight floods from your heart to be the very sun above us all. How beautiful.
Much Happiness. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-03-11 10:01 PM


Ahhh Miss Delaney is changing by the minute!  My how fast they grow.  Looks as though she is about to sing a duet with you.  Charming poem and picture Marge.  Thanks for the update!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Sometimes all you really wish for...
     is someone to wish for you.~

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2002-03-11 10:03 PM


Big hugs to you, la la la grandma!
Marsha
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
6 posted 2002-03-11 10:25 PM


Magie darling sister of my Oh my how wonderful she looks and sings the songs of her Grandma’s heart so well.

This is utterly gorgeous I love it, and yes she is a beauty darling heart

I wub you

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
7 posted 2002-03-11 11:14 PM


You go, gramma!

Cor

Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 50 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2002-03-11 11:43 PM


Marge~

Ohh such sweet music to sleep by.....wonderful....she is just Precious!!




Lauren~


Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-11-2002 11:43 PM).]

Dee
Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
9 posted 2002-03-12 05:43 AM


Marge, Delaney is absolutely beautiful. I can see why you are so inspired, Grandma.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

amigo
Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520
the earth school
10 posted 2002-03-12 10:33 AM


Oh...i can see how chweetly she's responding to Grammy's la-la-las...beautiful, Marge....
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
11 posted 2002-03-12 11:02 AM


Trust me on this... you DON'T want me to sing along... but your poem sure tempts me to do so! *G*

Tucking the quilting hour
in soft rock of cradlesong

I love these lines, Marge... what an image they conjure. *S* Beautiful baby... beautiful song. *S*

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

12 posted 2002-03-12 12:35 PM


Shes getting prettier all the time isnt she? Adorable Marge...hugss

                ~Victoria

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
13 posted 2002-03-12 07:35 PM


Magnus~
Thank you so much.  She is a delight~

MidniteSun~
Consider it done !

ThisDiamond~
Awwww, thank you~

Enchantress~
She 'sings' ... yes, she does~
Thank you sweetie~

Martie~
*Hugging* your La-La-La right back, sweet Sis~

MarshaLove~
Thank you ... I knew you'd love her too~
She's a doll alright !

Corinne~
*smiling* ... thank you hon~

GreenEyes~
Thanks ... this Grandma agrees 100%~

Dee~
Thank you, my friend~
She inspires my heart to sing~

Amigo~
*Grandma GRINS*

AuntieSuthernGal~
But ... could we count on you to hum ?
You picked my own favorite lines ... but of course !

Victoria~
Awwww .. This Grandma thinks so too !

*Thank you all so very much for the sweet replies~
You all get printed to put in the biggest Baby Book of Poetry that's ever gonna be done !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
14 posted 2002-03-12 09:27 PM


Marge:

Delaney gets more beautiful with each picture!  What a special time, when you can hold her and sing her to sleep. This is a precious poem, to go with that precious baby!

Betty Lou Hebert

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
15 posted 2002-03-12 09:45 PM


Awww Grandma, she is just adorable. I love your poem. Thank you for sharing this.
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
16 posted 2002-03-12 10:00 PM



What IS it about babies that make us sing...my granddaughter, soon to be 10, still remembers the age of two, and my singing

"I love you,
a bushel and a peck,
a bushel and a peck
and a hug around your neck..."

plus a few more from eras ago...

"How much is that doggy in the window..."

"Oh little playmate, come out and play with me...."

La La La La,
La La La la la
la la la la
la la la
la...


Just don't stop, Margie...


HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
17 posted 2002-03-12 11:16 PM


adorable , delightful and ohhhh so cute
this was truly a heartsong
Hope

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
18 posted 2002-03-13 07:29 AM


OOOOH-La-La
Such inspiration a muse has never seen...

Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
19 posted 2002-03-13 09:44 AM


sing along dear grandma....
and can imagine how Delaney delight your life.
so sing along dear grandma....never stop the la-la-la's

(((hugs)))
Charisma

Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
20 posted 2002-03-13 09:50 AM


la la la Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
21 posted 2002-03-13 09:51 AM


BettyLou~
Thank you sweet lady~

SmartChick~
Awww .. she loves the whispers from all her admirers~

Karilea~
Oh .. and I could add a hundred more~
And I do believe that the cradlesongs are remembered.

Hope~
Thank you for hearing my 'heartsongs'~

Nan~
Tee-Hee !
And lucky for the forums, I don't post them all !

Charisma~
She loves the whispers of the la-la-la songs~
Thanks hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
22 posted 2002-03-13 09:53 AM


InterLoper~
You sneaked in under the pen~
*smiles*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Marshalzu
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681
Lurking
23 posted 2002-03-13 09:58 AM


Wow this is so incredibly sweet, thank you for sharing this

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
24 posted 2002-03-13 10:03 AM


Andrew~
Thank you so much for the reply.
I sure enjoy sharing my Delaney Delight with friends~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

lunatic
Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172

25 posted 2002-03-13 10:29 AM


May I be allowed a small pout?  You don't write about me anymore.  Of course, if I am to be supplanted, it could not be by a better reason than Delaney
Take Delaney out one evening so you both will be bathed in my moonbeams

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
26 posted 2002-03-13 12:48 PM


LunaTic~

~To write you
full into the deepest
of the night-Filling you up
with a Delaney Delight write
There is no better glow than
this-Oh,to be touched with
sure gentleness of sweet
Delaney's baby kisses
How we glow~

*You may have your little 'pout'
but the phases of you
I'd not do without~

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
27 posted 2002-03-13 10:23 PM


seeing her sweet face makes me think there is hope for this world yet.....sing on Grandma
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Little La-La-La's

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary