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Outside my Window..Titias Challenge
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Outside my Window..Titias Challenge |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I see a sunny day..eighty three degrees I hear a bird singing..instead of buzzing bees it sings so loud I cant concentrate I don't know where it is must be on the roof or in the trees does it know I am listening? is it singing to me? I have my kitchen door opened it slammed shut from the wind sat a candle holder at the bottom of the door too nice to close it when its almost eighty four through my black wrought iron gates I see a pomegranate tree dancing in the breeze celebrating spring as the bird continues to tease I see a blue sky and hedges well groomed a lantern waiting to be lit lit by the moon I see a beautiful day a day of warm sun and if this bird don't stop singing im gonna get my gun.. Cause its giving me a headache while writing this challenge for fun. "Mistakes are the portals of discovery." -- James Joyce [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-14-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I love birds so much and I love hearing them sing as I write, out in my backyard we have some dogwood trees next to my pond and a whole bunch of little sparrows alwqays fly over there and sing together on the tree! (giggles in delight) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this sounds like such a beautiful day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHA bang bang, OH NO>>> nice Victoria and I envy you with that nice weather. floria Floria |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
LOL! Your ending gave me a giggle. Enjoyed much, Victoria *hugs*Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
noah..yes i love birds too..i dont know kind it was..i wish i could have seen it haa floria..well a beautiful day anyway..nice to have the doors open hugs michael..ha..thank you ..i dont really have a gun ha..hugs |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~V~ LOL what kinda bird?? every morning I wake to birds chirping out side my window, when your done can I borrow that gun??? ok I am totally teasing....but I know what ya mean with the little noise makers....they are graceful though, at times....  HUGSSS Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-13-2002 10:19 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Eighty-four degrees!!! I'll take it! Love this Victoria. Challenge well met. Cute ending....you always make me smile! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lauren...dont know what kind..i see alot of robins around here but today i didnt...hugss nancy..thank you..yes a beautiful day today...you make me smile too hugss |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOLOLOL!!!!! Gosh, I LOVE a sense of humor like yours! Blast that bird, Victoria!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you deery..ha..i guess i could have closed the door but i would have sweat to death.. sounded like a happy bird though ha |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I envy your weather! I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha Ha, like your twisted ending. Sounds like you live in a beautiful place. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you skyfire...yes i think spring is finally here hugss sandra..thank you so much..glad you enjoyed hon...hugss |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Definitely an unexpected ending... one I enjoyed thoroughly! LOL This is great, Victoria. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I did the challenge too, wasn't it fun?! Yours is so cute! Hey, didn't you see me, I was standing right outside your window haha! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
suthern..thank you so much..so glad you liked it...it was fun.. hugsjoanna..yes i know...i think i read yours..thanks joanna..and stop peeking in my window haa..hugs |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Victoria you made my laugh (sort of) I have woodpecker that is parking on the highest chimney of this house trying to drive me insane I swear! I found out this is how they try to get the attention of a mate, but he may not live long enough! And, you are making me jealous as it is snowing here, yes snowing! I can't believe it myself so I am jealous of your view~but you poem was great! The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
oh my gosh a woodpecker haa..ya know i dont think i have ever really seen one around here..must be noisy ha...thanks for peeking in Sharon...hugss..glad you enjoyed ~Victoria~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Shall I send over one of my five cats??? Not that they will ever harm the bird for... One is too lazy and too fat to move One has three legs, too few to jump the roof One is blind so she won't see a bird One is too busy catching insects in the muddirth The last one is new, I don't her quite well She may or may not....it's hard to tell Thanks for meeting my challenge so well Victoria, I really enjoyed your windowview. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (03-16-2002 09:38 PM).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
*grin Reminds me of a day last week when the birds were so noisy. It was eerie....like something out of "The Birds". Cute poem, Victoria. *s |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks Titia..it was a fun challenge..glad to hear from you tonight hugs chansondegeste...yes i remember that movie very well ha..thanks for peeking in |
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