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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2002-03-16 08:20 PM

(A stream-of-conscience list poem. *s)

My man with his washboard stomach, fine lint coverage
My man with storm tossed ocean hair,
coffee froth curls behind scroll ears and moonshine hairline

My man, with the mountain cliff chin
and lashes of rainy day rivelets,
speaks with a windbent reed whim
through daylily lisps.

My man stands straight on a Pisa foundation,
My man with Beethoven stoicism plays keyless
through quarter inch racing stripe fingers

My man, with his deer in the headlights common sense
and hyena crazed laughter, walks with a broken gate gait
on lethargic stilt legs from the Five and Dime store
but I love most his molten steel stare
My man with the steepled, bats in the belfry pride.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-16 08:32 PM

BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is a powerfully expressive poem of the one you love, dearest friend, your descriptive voice always shines in your poetry! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2002-03-16 08:41 PM

Noah, thank you muchly for your neverending-glow response. You're a Dear. *s

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-03-16 08:48 PM

There is nothing as handsome as a man you know and love so well...
Woooowww! Really good work. ThisDiamond

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2002-03-16 08:51 PM

Hiya, This Diamond. Thank you muchly! *s

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

5 posted 2002-03-16 09:10 PM

"deer in the headlights common sense"

rofl - i found this quite amusing... interesting choice of descriptives.

Chris

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2002-03-16 09:13 PM

*grin

Christopher, I kinda like that phrase myself. *chuckle

Thank you!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2002-03-16 10:09 PM

Such talent you have...loved the images
of your man Chanson~
Does he always look that good?

Simply super writing~

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

8 posted 2002-03-16 10:17 PM

Blue Serenade-- No not always. He has the occassional bad-hair day. *grin

I like your handle. *s

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