Cradled In Your Heart (Choka Challenge)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-03-13 01:06 PM

Cradled In Your Heart
By: Noah Eaton
3/13/02

Cheerleading daydreams
Sing to me as I hold you
Your emerald eyes
Chanting mystical doctrines
Suppressed in question
Now recovered in loves bliss
Artifacts of joy
Excavated from Eden
Hidden in your eyes
Now revealed from luscious lips
Embracing you with tears
Tears of angelic rapture
Gazing in your eyes
Feeling the beat of your heart
Croon of your smile
The moistness of cherry lips
The silk of your skin
Worn upon your goddess body
Tapestry of God
You are a priceless China doll
Which I’ll always hold dear
And love and protect always
My sweet Joanna
I’ll shower your honeyed lips
Sweetly and softly
With silk butterfly kisses
As I lay with you
Falling into your warm arms
Soaking in loves sun
Gardening at night
Many memories we'll fathom
Making happy love to you
Cradled in your hearts heaven…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-13-2002 01:14 PM).]

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

1 posted 2002-03-13 01:20 PM

Awwww Noah.....such true feeling you let your heart pour onto the pages. *soft smile*
Let me guess....you are MEGA in love, n'est pas?

The lines
Artifacts of joy
Excavated from Eden
Hidden in your eyes
are phrases that can only be written if the writer feels them immensely!
tSR

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-03-13 01:28 PM

Noah, you are just too romantic....no, I take that back...there is never enough romance in the world. Lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-03-13 01:38 PM

lovely noah dear..hope your heart will always be full of romance...*touching you with my magic wand* i borrowed the wand from nancy ha..

hugss

~Vic

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

4 posted 2002-03-13 01:53 PM

Beautiful and soulful rendering of Choka's Challenge. As always, Noah, you write with such passion and indescribable beauty.

***Ivy Rose

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2002-03-13 02:50 PM

A nice, long Choka challenge well met

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-03-13 03:40 PM

" a pricelss china doll" so well said, wonderful Noah, love this, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

7 posted 2002-03-13 03:43 PM

Noah, once again your expression of love is excellent. Such wonderful phrases you excavate from the depths of your heart. Beautiful love poem. Cheryl

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-03-13 04:59 PM

So lovely, another beautiful write from the romantic heart of Noah.
Sandra

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-03-13 05:03 PM

Splendid my dear!
You always meet a challenge to a T! I admire that about you

You are a wonderful, dedicated poet.

(hugs)

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