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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-03-13 05:06 AM

Windy Whisper

tonight the wind
plays a tune
and the light is
all the moons
I run to hear
the dark’s song
feeling its breath
of how it longs
I catch the scent
of northern air
blended perfectly
with southern flair
intertwine now
sweet caressing breeze
how you make me
weak in the knees
no melody have I
ever heard crisper
as I wrap around
your windy whisper

"Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread."

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2002-03-13 07:04 AM

helen

wow...this was a really cool write!
i loved your expressions in this, such
a lovely way of writing about the wind.
you took an everyday topic and wrote it
with real flair! great job...

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-03-13 09:17 AM

Have you fallen for a yankee?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-03-13 09:39 AM

no melody have I
ever heard crisper
as I wrap around
your windy whisper

Helen - there you go again! Blowing me away with your words. Wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2002-03-13 09:44 AM

A wonderful poem, thank you for sharing it with us

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2002-03-13 12:37 PM

I run to hear
the dark’s song
feeling its breath
of how it longs
I catch the scent
of northern air
blended perfectly
with southern flair
intertwine now
sweet caressing breeze
how you make me
weak in the knees
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful lines.........

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

6 posted 2002-03-13 01:17 PM

This is a fantastic image, involving all the senses. Thank you.

Nan

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2002-03-13 01:49 PM

As always, I love your style and of course I enjoyed this!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

8 posted 2002-03-13 02:41 PM

Your poetry always seems to breathe softly, but with a certain passion sometimes only a woman can convey. I love this.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-13 05:10 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully soothing, sweet friend, your words sing and whisper like the wind to all our ears with loves joy! (kiss on cheek) May you forever move gracefully with the wind of rapture, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sahring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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