Open Poetry #19 |
Write For Me A Love Song |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Write for me a love song Expressing words of love so true Together we'll make the hit parade With songs of love by me and you Serenade me with a melody Play a tune so soft and sweet The words of your unchained melody Are liable to sweep me off my feet Sing to me in harmony Of this love we share so grand Walk with me beneath the moonlight As the waves crash onto the sand Play for me a symphony With words and music so divine Through each and every chorus Our love will eternally shine I'll dedicate my life to you As you lift me high above Our music taking us higher Upon the wings of love Suetang |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely Sue! I wish I could...but I'm always off key! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your love forever shower you with serenades and sing love to your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
im sure you write very good love songs too sue, ha..loved it..hugs ~Vic |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Speaking of style. You've got it! I love this. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very pretty poem and has a nice cadence to it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved it! The rhyme was lovely as was the theme. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow. What a poem. So... happy. And encouraging. And romantic. I'd love to have a deep reply, but all I'd got is your word choice and rhyme and flow were beautiful. ~ Titus Will I ever forget what happened today? |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This is very nice. Actually, writing a love song is very difficult. I've been trying for some time now and it always comes out wrong. But it's a nice thought. |
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