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Martie

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California

0 posted 2002-02-17 01:30 PM

Sunday Softening

The rain touches the gentle,
a rhythm of roof and tree.

Heaped under blankets,
we, listen to Sunday softening,
marveling eachother.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-17 01:36 PM

*sigh* this poem has such a tender feeling that it truly touched the heart softly to read it..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-17 01:37 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-17 01:41 PM

Softly, gently, exquisitely said Martie.
~Sunday hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2002-02-17 01:46 PM

I like

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-02-17 03:08 PM

So little...

saying so much....

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-02-17 04:02 PM

So gentle and comforing.

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-17 04:50 PM

So short but aware it means a lot
Very nice Martie

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2002-02-17 08:09 PM

*SIGH*

*WINK*

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2002-02-17 08:42 PM

Martie,
Lovely.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

10 posted 2002-03-14 10:28 AM

nice write

vandana

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11 posted 2002-03-14 10:29 AM

nice write

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2002-03-14 11:19 AM

Martie~

'Sunday Softening

The rain touches the gentle,
a rhythm of roof and tree.

Heaped under blankets,
we, listen to Sunday softening,
marveling each other.'

*sigh* ... yes, that would do it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

13 posted 2002-03-14 12:07 PM

Martie-

this was heavenly...such a soft
and sweet poem you've penned. left me
feeling all warm inside. thank you.

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

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Purgatorial Incarceration

14 posted 2002-03-14 12:10 PM

martie - i really liked the way you paused before and after "we" that really made this for me - turned it into something tangible. really cool

Chris

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