Don't Cry, Baby (response to Marshalzu's poem)

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Open Poetry #19

Don't Cry, Baby (response to Marshalzu's poem)

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-03-12 09:20 PM

As I listen to
your pain filled words
I feel
The loathing and disgust
you have and I
hear your sobs and wish I
could take you in my heart
forever as I try to break your pain
the only way I know how
for
I love you and I
hate to see you like this.

I want to die peacefully, in my sleep, like my grandfather, not screaming, terrified, like his passengers.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-12 09:22 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yolu are such a wonderful friend to us all and you always make me smile whenever I see your name on here! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I know Andrew will love this just a smuch as I do! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-03-12 09:25 PM

And so you have dear poet...ThisDiamond

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-03-13 03:22 AM

As usual you made me smile

thank you for this Rhonda, I love you dearly

Andrew

"The pin didn't drop it came and crashed down"

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2002-03-13 06:43 AM

rhonda,

what a pretty write this was! your
love andrew and you are very lucky
to bask in such a wonderful love.
always take good care of one another!

take care.
amy

"Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't
mean they don't love you with all they have"

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-03-15 04:04 AM

A wonderful respone Rhonda....as emotion filled as the first.

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

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