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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-03-14 12:04 PM

Watchwords

I sometimes feel the world, it's crush
when words, those words are meant to hurt.
Though oft' denied, they do the same,
my feelings thus, become inert.

I reason this and reason that
and try to place myself in theirs.
Nevertheless, misunderstood
those words then consequence in flares.

So take another breath, do I
deeper still, inhaling words.
Then force it out to leave no trace
of meanings slanted, of those unheard.

I watch as words sent, cast a glow.
And leave the lost of, in the know.

~Wynter

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-03-14 12:32 PM

"So take another breath, do I
deeper still, inhaling words.
Then force it out to leave no trace
of meanings slanted, of those unheard.

I watch as words sent, cast a glow.
And leave the lost of, in the know."

wow.....I like this

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-03-14 02:10 PM

Hi SEA... sometimes misunderstandings due to moods, brings about a jumping to conclusions...I, for one, have been trying to learn not do this...for words without tone cannot be judged. *s
hugsss
M

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2002-03-14 02:43 PM

May I keep this?

Wonderful writing!

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-03-14 03:17 PM

yes. . . "words without tone cannot be judged. . . "

I like that. . . thank you Wynter. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2002-03-14 03:25 PM

Wonderful writing - enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-03-14 04:28 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo wonderfully said, dearest friend, this sonnet is soooo wonderfully expressed with the gist of language and hidden meanings words possess! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

7 posted 2002-03-14 06:42 PM

Very wise perceptions.

((Maureen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2002-03-15 06:55 AM

Auguste..you may keep anything you see and like of mine on here..thank you for the comment. *s
M

Sven, you are welcome *s.

Chris, glad you stopped by *s

Noah, you found hidden meanings?
I better go have another look. *s
Thanks
M

Newell, wise when remembered *s
hugss
M

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