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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2002-03-12 02:30 PM



What if I appear
out of nowhere in your dreams
and claim your love as mine
What if you can't turn me down
because my love
is your only helping hand
What if I wake up
next to you
and I smell like you
What if you can't turn your back
this time because
our love might me too compromised

[This message has been edited by walker (03-12-2002 02:32 PM).]

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peaches73533
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1 posted 2002-03-12 02:49 PM


Very thought provoking question.If you figure out the answer let me know.I'm sure this wouod be a hard one to decide.Nicely done.
Peaches

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2 posted 2002-03-12 02:52 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, this is indeed a wonderful question and I guess only time can answer and the power of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-03-12 02:52 PM


Beautiful......
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4 posted 2002-03-12 04:15 PM


Pretty

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

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