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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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time you are a river in distant thought slow moving for child eyes you drop a year down hard face cliffs over rough edges then back to smooth faster flowing narrowing of width prospective of a journey mating time begins another moment joins then quicken is accomplished older rocks become worn from fast flow use you are a moment drop faster than sunray shimmer at the bottom of the hill where quiet of maturity waits as a deep pool of you... ©Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks Sy |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is a wonderful transition of time, sweet friend, your wonderful words always bring a smile to my face and have me thinking! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
You inspire me, Dark Stranger. I have posted my response in a new thread, "My River". Thanks for your ray of light. ((Dark Stranger)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This flows so smoothly, reads so beautifully...sigh..it's a keeper!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS A beauty, this! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah...bless you amigo, thanks so much Silver , so pleased to cause a good thought thanks Devine 1, you are such a lady here (wink) darn it! Ms Martie, thank you my friend for your reviews |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this reminds me of a conversation with a friend recently....I love the ending |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
DS~ You take the mundane and make it sing in only the way you can... Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
SEA, thank you for your read and for relating to this.. Indigo, thank you for making my mundane words a light in your eyes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~Loving this one....for sure! Hugs, Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchanting nancy... thank you for the moments you make me smile |
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