navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Until the break of dawn
Open Poetry #19
Post A Reply Post New Topic Until the break of dawn Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-03-12 02:20 PM



Let this be our last dance
let our love live free
as our passion sinks deep
Let this moment flow
until it shows
how much we love each other so
Kiss my fears away
don't let me say another word
don't let me disturb
this unending thirst
Make me want you more
and with each touch
take me closer to the joy
that loving you brings
And when this yearning culminates
in an uncontrollable bliss
Let sleep come
and calm our desires
until the break of dawn

© Copyright 2002 walker - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-03-12 02:30 PM


Damn, walker...wish I'd written that!
peaches73533
Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981
OK, USA
2 posted 2002-03-12 02:52 PM


WOW!!!!! This is so full of power and passion.I absolutely love it.
Peaches

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-03-12 02:54 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, you always write passion so gorgeously! (kiss on cheek) May the joy of love forever fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
4 posted 2002-03-12 04:17 PM


walker,

   I really like this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #19 » Until the break of dawn

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary