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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-03-12 11:56 AM

Last night, you
softly said hello
to my soul
awoke the ache
of missing you
….still….

~SEA~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-03-12 12:01 PM

WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...you are always so wonderful with your words, sweet friend, I love this so much, it is a little sad but breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) YAY!!! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-12-2002 12:02 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-03-12 12:02 PM

Sea,
I like it, I like it.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-03-12 12:02 PM

Circe darling girl this is sooooooooo incredibly wonderful. I am never disappointed by the artistry and wonder you craft into your poems and this is amazing. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow is just perfect.

Wonderful picture you’ve painted here, really really beautiful

Truly sensational writing, beauty is always welcome darling girl and YOU bring so much of it

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

Thank you for this wonderful poem it’s utterly utterly wonderful
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-03-12 12:11 PM

WOW!! Incredibly beautiful Sue! Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-03-12 12:19 PM

This is beautiful, Susan. (((hugs)))

me

Stars will shine when I am gone
Earth will spin on as before
Gulls still race along the shore
Morning star, still kiss the dawn

~ M. Auguste

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-03-12 12:24 PM

*sighs* I really like this~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-03-12 01:09 PM

you say something beautiful in your 20 or less! I always enjoy reading you.

Accordionmaid
Member

since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
MA/USA

8 posted 2002-03-12 01:20 PM

...back to peaceful sleep...lovely poem.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-03-12 03:43 PM

My soul
still calls out
to you
beyond my control
my heart ...
remembers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

10 posted 2002-03-12 03:58 PM

Susan,

This is really lovely

I like it.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-03-12 09:35 PM

Nice, I like this format, you did it justice

Sandra

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2002-03-12 10:01 PM

Icredible!! Love this!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

13 posted 2002-03-12 10:08 PM

Susan - Ouch! This one hurt. I have had the same dream, of course, mine was about a different person.lol The poem, though short, sure packed a lot of emotion. Nicely done.

Dave

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

14 posted 2002-03-15 04:12 PM

susan,

this was beautiful!! such soft lovely
images you paint...your heart shines
beautiful and full of ache...it's strange
how out of pain sometimes comes our
best poetry...*hugs*

take care.
amy

"just because someone doesn't love you as you'd like them to, does not mean they don't love you with all their heart"

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2002-03-15 04:14 PM

last nights
laced tears fell
puddling in memories
of you

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

16 posted 2002-03-15 04:48 PM

Nice Sea, soft and nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

17 posted 2002-03-15 04:48 PM

In dreams there are no reasons. Just love.

((Susan))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

18 posted 2002-03-15 04:58 PM

As I sit here
in denial
I wonder how long
it will be
before I stop looking over my shoulder
hoping to see you
running after me

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

19 posted 2002-03-15 05:02 PM

Oh this one was full to overflowing. Wonderful.

Nan

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

20 posted 2002-03-15 08:53 PM

ok Duncan,
that reply made me cry
sometimes I wonder about you
sometimes I wonder how you can know
the wishes inside my soul
and write them so beautifully
and make my heart ache

thank you all very much...
my heart has been trying to do Spring cleaning of sorts, but some things we can
never throw out.....ever...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

21 posted 2002-03-15 11:05 PM

Sea sometimes we don't throw out things for a reason, they are meant to stay in our lives for a reason. Loved this poem, and know this one too and wake up to it often.

The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives.
~* Albert Einstein *~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

22 posted 2002-03-16 08:13 AM

Then the shadows
spoke, echoing
he's gone

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