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The Legend of Lady Gwen and King Carrick (or True Love Never Dies)
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The Legend of Lady Gwen and King Carrick (or True Love Never Dies) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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A man of magic and of love a maiden faire he called his own through circumstance misunderstood they left eachother all alone. Three times he had to make it right but she did not believe his love he offered gifts, diamonds and pearls but of his heart, did not speak of. And she, in need of heartfelt words turned him away, though she did cry His anger rose and made him curse they would not meet again to try Until three times one hundred years and three more sets of lovers true would give eachother all their hearts as he had been unable to. The Lady Gwen, she lived and died and still she loved her fairy King She waited, haunting patiently for just the day, her love to bring. And Carrick, he was waiting too though with less patience, he would see and try to bind all lovers close so with his lady he could be. Regrets had lived within him long because his temper caused the rift his curse was full responsible for their sharp turn from loves true gift. Then one fine day, it came to pass that all six lovers found their hearts and released him to Lady Gwen together..nevermore apart. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-14-2002 12:38 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
... and they lived happily ever after  I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 OH gosh...I absolutely love it...you are weaving magic, Sandra and leave me in awe of the vision of it...BRAVO!!!**big hugs**HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! May you have the happiest Valentines Day, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A most lovely tale... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gotta love a happy ending! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this tale Sandra... And the happily-ever-after ending! Perfect for Valentine's Day! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - this is quite a revealing story you tell. Very many meanings I see in this.. BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely story, I didn't understand about the six hearts though. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A lovely tale Catalina, Yes I'm with Keth, I went back again to see if there were six characters and nope. wondering.......floria Floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
The six hearts are the three pairs of lovers who had to unite before the hero and heroine could be together. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sandra- A lovely story, and I love the 'happily ever after' ending.. Well penned, my friend. Happy Valentine's Day! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...being a sucker for this era of love, needless to say...I did like it... Thanx.. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*bump*  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I missed this, and what a lovely story it was.
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A bit of re-read, for the romantics in our community... |
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