Open Poetry #19 |
Silent Words |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Silent Words My eyes want to close, out of tiredness, wanting to see again that look of desire in eyes staring down. The circles under mine, betray me, as I lie to myself daily, in accepting the emptiness I feel. Remembering that first touch: Warm and sweet that moment when fingertips reach out, hands connect, kissed slightly by white velvet rose petals glistening with dew, my body calling out it's rhythm to you. Yours sending shivers of fire to ignite the intensity of... I close my eyes, taking me there, where your whispers teasingly share, where eyes watching from behind raise me through the shadows of past and with silent words we connect, as you close in on me and I release to you the etched messages awaiting your embrace. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (03-12-2002 03:38 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
SIGH...Me too, Maureen. This is lovely. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl, you know exactly what I’m going to say about this it’s spectacular. TRULY PERFECTION, never has this been said better. I know this well. You are an amazing writer of feeling and truth. The ache of regret laces through this beautifully Fabulous writing darling utterly utterly fabulous Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Sandra, I am just going through a period of tiredness, I guess...sometimes it would seem better to just close the eyes and shut out the world...at least for awhile *s M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Marsha, you are so uplifting in your responses... hugsss M *not regret as much as just missing the warmth of... *s |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow. Maureen, such images flooding my mind! WOW! Overload! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Maureen, I like Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words whisper always with such dreamy and sweet love and emotion! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may this joy forever sing to your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually beautiful....you have captured what I have felt many times...Very well done...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Interloper...Overload?..That's exactly how I feel sometimes *s Tara, Noah, thank you, your time to stop and respond is greatly appreciated *s Karen, a nice feeling isn't it.. *s ((hugssssss)) Maureen |
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