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Ode to Diamond's Sax (word usage challenge)
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Ode to Diamond's Sax (word usage challenge) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Jazz that beat short and neat but what I meant to hit was take any word like fit try it out in different ways keep that word, try not to sway. your poem has rhythm, swoons like a tune makes me want to reach for the moon but the exercise was to use one word couple it with another, like it's n'er been heard. put it with 'up', looks like someone got bust hitting away means getting through the crust, take hit, like fit, it can go far stick it with 'off' and your onto mars! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-12-2002 11:26 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Ooohhhhhh...I love the use of wordplay in your words, sweet friend, this is excellent and shines with onomatopoeia, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this sings like music! Yiou have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Delightful to be in your service kind teacher, I brought them...you teach 'em. I have enjoyed this very much and will take your challenge. ThisDiamond |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was darn jazzy, and you know something it almost had a song of its own, like a jitterbug! It was very kewl. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Diamond, Just keep up your good writing Mysteria, Glad you liked this! |
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