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Neptune's Net |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it was another cup of bluster sun in cock-a hoop of high feather with swagger jaunty in his rays he disdained the knees of my vanity I wore burnskin jackets over my seed lest it be selfishly abandoned in furrows of my virtueous immorality was I then the reputable phoenix? did my covet call loud the lash and did my guillotine lids earn the lifeless right to blink electric noose of neck to lethal or was my godling odin just a logo with no rhema to proclaim in exercise did the north seas applaude my deity of one with mirrors and smooth glass pool was my mythical forbidden from the begin and did I walk with baby feet legs from some mother edge of pain to be the journyman of devine penance I rested in wallow heat gluttony overdone in my lack of potation forgive my prohibition and service me let me worhship with voracity at the well wet alter of your specter ©Dark... [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-12-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! OH MY GOSH, I JUST LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE, THIS IS SPECTACULAR!!! This sounded to me like someone crying to his Master for forgiveness and to find solace high above from which he was situated before! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I just can't get away from the feeling of sensuality the fills every poem of yours I read...Amazing work that is aflame with inner passions...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Noah...thank you my friend..I call this my "mouthy style" ...actually was waiting for this little store call Neptunes' Net to open so I could get a bottle of water... Startime, was it suggestive again...darn I am trying so hard not to do that...kinda almost more or less...thank you for the read. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow what an absoloutly wonderful poem, I just loved the way it was written, thank you for sharing it with us Andrew |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Andrew..so pleased to have you enjoy it |
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