Open Poetry #19 |
She was in Great Shape |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Repost: She was in Great Shape She ran her three miles every day. Swam her thirty laps. Watched her diet in every way. Abstained all the fats. Exercise was her answer. Her routine mainstay. Exercise the enhancer. Was her fun and play. She was a vegetarian. Weighed a perfect weight. An avid sanitarian. Cleanliness her fate. She really thought she had the answer. Laying there in crepe. She died of pancreatic cancer. But died in great shape. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
No what I expected at all Seymour, lol. There is much truth in this piece. How often we strive for perfection, then get sidelined out of the blue. I think I'll stick with my steak and fries so I can enjoy my time here. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like you've lost a friend, dear Sy?.. Sorry to hear that - Love ya.. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I guess we all get hit with something ... so I agree with Kit ... enjoy our stay as best we can ~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My grandma used to say, "I want to be real sick when I die. If I'm healthy I'm gonna be real mad!" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggggssssss) Oh Seymour, I know this feeling ever so well myself, my heart goes out to her loss although I'm glad she did so much and she was proud and happy of herself and staying healthy! (sigh) This is a wonderful sensitive poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! : May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The ironies of life set to rhyme...written with your signature wit and wisdom... You are my morning bowl of wise rice and my WINKIE STINKY *L* morning Sy-babers. tell Randy the tea is on |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I don't think I've seen this before. Flad I got to read it now. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember this...even then it made me wonder, since I don't get as much exercise for all of my day job...what will I die of? Tired fingers, probably... Thanks for the smiles! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Interesting and thoughtful writing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Good idea. Nan, Its been a while. Love you too. Rex, Good idea. Balladeer, Sounds right to me. Noah, Thank you JM, Morning love, Randy will be there. WW Randy. Smart Chick, I'm glad too. Sunshine, Tired fingers sounds good. LOL Martie, Thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew from the title this was NOT about me!!! *G* But it's filled with such wisdom, I'd know it was yours even without reading your name, Seymour... it is excellent. *S* No matter how hard we try to stack the odds in our favor, our number will come up. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Everyone rushes to grow up and then long to be children again. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Oh yes Sy..beautiful skinny people die too dont they..when their time comes.. I have often had these same thoughts.. ~Vic |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there, I know this isn’t about me or mum, I did love the humour of this one. Very clever witty and perspicacious none of us knows how long we have, lets enjoy what we do. Wonderful writing I like this Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vic, Yes they do, thanks for the read. Krissy, Enjoyed your comment. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Part of being in great shape is to know when you're only going in useless circles...not really listening to the whole self. Oh well, anyway, it's worth a try to get/stay in shape. Even if just to fight off being worse! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Life is far too short to not live it! So hand me a candy apple and point me towards the carousel... Enjoyed so much Sy! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Accordionmaid, Got nothing against being in shape. Thanks for the read and comment. Enchantress, Your right, enjoyed your reply. |
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