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Stealing Thunder
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Stealing Thunder |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
 Was it just yesterday that we frolicked, played out our love's emotions? Didn't I hear the sweet splendor of your laughter? Then...I came along and stole some of your thunder. We were caught in an intricate dance of egos, of wanting to have our moment in the thunder.Showers catching us, lightening striking. And, we exploded our overwhelming passion onto white paper which waited to be breathed upon with inspiration, with tempestuous words...that roared out their thunder. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shine brightly like lightning and always crash upon these pages with such inspiration and love to us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ivy Rose, Does that make those feelings official when they are documented?  The storm fits your experience well. Nice write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ivy, this sounds serious. When lightning and thunder blaze through dark night Nature is saying let God make it right Calm the heavens the land and the sea In a silver lining of purity. Whatever happens, God bless you! ((Ivy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
I guess that I never really thought of it like that before...but it is so true! Some poetry is spectacular in content and hue! Joyce mutington/joyce |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write. Thought provoking |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love is the sound of thunder clapping. Such a passionate storm Ivy Rose! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ 'we exploded our overwhelming passion onto white paper which waited to be breathed upon with inspiration, with tempestuous words...that roared out their thunder.' Quite honestly ... I found this electrifying~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Gee, Ivy, this is exciting-I like it. Nan |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I like the thought of egos colliding, only to merge in a thunderous acclaim...I like this very much, Ivy... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love storms, so this one caught my eye. Glad I stopped. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow a lot of electricity in this storm Ivy. Wonderful poem. floria Floria |
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