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Natural Light |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Natural Light For one exquisite moment, light departed afternoon and settled softly in your hair, silken as the love you shared with children gathered at your feet. In that instant my life eased as when the day decides to go; though not just yet, please, not without a warmth to touch and blush your face and call it sunset. I've still to thank the natural light for bringing you so close to me that ever after God may bless my eyes but not my heart with darkness. RMW |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
RMW this just flowed from line to line. great poem. floria Floria |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so lovely..these words...epecially the light settling in her hair...nice, very nice *s Maureen |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
what a vision you paint with this...breath taking wonderful write, its good to read you again |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo smooth and beautiful, sweet friend, may true love forever fill your heart and caress it with light and rapture! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob A soft look from you would make a blush, I think, without the sunset. This was lovely! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
rmw- a beautiful, beautiful write!! i loved the imagery you painted here...such a soft warm feeling overcame me while reading this! wonderful poem of love... take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If natural light blesses your thoughts this way, may we always be the recipient of your thoughts... this is truly beautiful, and very, very precious, and yes, sir, a Keeper... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! This is breath-taking. I had to remind myself to exhale, as I found myself holding my breath while reading. Exquisite and most certainly headed for my library. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Robert, please come by more often, we miss you... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For one exquisite moment, light departed afternoon and settled softly in your hair, silken as the love you shared with children gathered at your feet. In that instant my life eased ======================================= and blush your face and call it sunset. I've still to thank the natural light for bringing you so close to me that ever after God may bless my eyes but not my heart with darkness. ======================================= Exquisite indeed.... poet sir this is glorious...in both imagery and heart intent. So good to see you posting again. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely work, Bob. Cor |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you all for taking a moment to comment. I appreciate that. Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you took me there |
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