Open Poetry #19 |
A Ramble from my Heart |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Some nights it echos inside these blue walls, Makes appealing comfort the words I find here. Rattling around this empty place of expression, I stumble across so many items that bring cheer. But I find words that give pause to meaningful reflection. I read of those who have died and gone on. And how their loved ones bravely renew their lives, Bearing the memories of those whose departure is such pain. And occasionally, mind you, there is a bit of humor, Well worth the search and the subsequent guffaw. Quite often we fall on the floor and laugh, But we laugh out loud and laugh our ass off. There's not much better than propping your feet up here, And reading about our friends and families that we love. For it's a great place to have a coffee and warm your buns, And watch for the magic when they release the dove. It's a wonderful place these blue echoing walls, They bounce the laughter and pain around again. But it helps us to cope with our lives when we leave, And helps us to forget our heartache and pain! So that's why we left the door open for you, It's possible we've all gone to sleep by now. But understand we trust you with our things, And just leave a little of yourself for us anyhow. Since you have been here and looked around, We're pretty certain there are valuable things you learned. So come on back when the rest of us are up and about, Let us greet you cuase that is what you've earned! March 10, 2002 Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy [This message has been edited by Larry C (03-11-2002 01:23 AM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Larry, this is so wonderful makes for warm fuzzies |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Your words are so true, as there is a little piece of all who write here. A very nice invitation it was indeed Larry. The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
leaves you with a warm fuzzy feeling, just like home. thanks for the welcome. hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It's a wonderful place these blue echoing walls, They bounce the laughter and pain around again. But it helps us to cope with our lives when we leave, And helps us to forget our heartache and pain!" I've often wondered how many others enjoy coming in to these forums for a read ... people whom we may never know ourselves ... and yet "they" may very well know "us". What a lovely piece Larry ... you got me pondering this morning. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's nice to know we've got you watching the place while some of us are catching some zzzzzzz's... .. Thankya - Nice piece here... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's a wonderful place these blue echoing walls, They bounce the laughter and pain around again. But it helps us to cope with our lives when we leave, And helps us to forget our heartache and pain! So that's why we left the door open for you, It's possible we've all gone to sleep by now. But understand we trust you with our things, And just leave a little of yourself for us anyhow. =============================== you poet sir...are our new PR poet!! and about your title? .... what else could they be from you this ones gift is in its sincerety. waay cool Larry!! You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Amazing. I'm keeping this one, ya know that. And as soon as I find a way to put my name on it as the author, I will. You never fail Larry. You always touch me in my solar plexis. Leave that Webster's dictionary alone, you already know this one. BTW, I'm the one who needs a dictionary today. I have a feeling it is spelled plexus. But the meaning is clear as a lucite window. (Thanks for the lucid lucite word idea, Accordionmaid) [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-11-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry, this is terrific! If this is how you ramble then you can stay up every night and greet those that stop by for a read. You sure roll out the welcome mat in a wonderful way! Hugs. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Some ramblers need new bumpers. (pun intended) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved this ramble |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is such a wonderful ramble, sweet friend, you are always a delight to us all! I always love to read every poem I can here, for I too believe there is a part of each other in all of us and as we all inspire each other, we find we belong to one another in the spirit of friendship! (big hugggssssss) You are a wonderful friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Larry larry larry, where do these thoughts come from.. this is great...I must come sneaking in here one night late and see who walks these rooms at night. great one here.floria Floria |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Thanks for the hug and finding the warm fuzzies! back. James, Thanks so much. Sharon, Cool. I'm delighted for your reply. Thanks. Donna, Where are those pictures? I'm glad you found the warm fuzzies and back. Thanks. Kit, Can't believe I'm the on who got you pondering! Thanks so much! Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy [This message has been edited by Larry C (03-11-2002 11:35 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nan, Somebodies gotta do it! And...it's my pleasure. Thanks. JM, Oh you made my day! (JM made my day, I can't believe it) Thanks a bunch. Kacy, You're gonna torcher me with the words aren't ya'. My dictionary is in storage in Oregon ya' know. LOL And thanks for the fun. *bump* Nancy, It is a pleasant chore. Thanks. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Interloper, Hey thank you for that! Noah, Wow you are so right! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ I have found some nights just echo...among the pages of blue,and of life....you have said this in your style of compassion, and charm.....what a beautiful read... Lauren~ Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (03-12-2002 12:31 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, There you are adding your sweet voice to the echo of this place. I like that! Thanks. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
It is amazing what this place can do for the soul, isn't it? You have done Passions proud with your praise, Larry. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dee, It is indeed and thank you so much. Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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