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Munda
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since 1999-10-08

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The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-03-10 05:15 AM

Illuminated by love's sweet embrace,
Within the shelter of an Angel's wings,
Caress of tenderness and loving grace,
Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing.

Within the shelter of an Angel's wings,
Two melodies entwine to only one.
Aloft the stars and moon two spirits sing,
And watch the moon embracing morning's sun.

Two melodies entwine to only one,
Ethereal awareness stills their cries,
As when the moon embraces morning's sun,
In universal peace all distance dies.

Ethereal awareness stills their cries,
While fantasy turns to reality,
In universal peace all distance dies,
When kindred spirits meet their destiny.

While fantasy turns to reality,
They feel the breath of immortality;
When kindred spirits meet their destiny,
The Universe composes poetry.

They feel the breath of immortality,
Caress of tenderness and loving grace;
The Universe composes poetry,
Illuminated by love's sweet embrace.

Munda

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-03-10 07:21 AM

Yes...liked it in Workshop...like it better here!

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

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2 posted 2002-03-10 09:01 AM

Oh my, makes me think I should attend that workshop. Great subject matter for this pantoum, the style of which I love. great work Munda. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-03-10 11:35 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of love always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) This is an outstanding pantoum, sweet friend, it sings with such poetic melody, I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Munda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2002-03-10 11:44 AM

I LOVE to see Pantoums of Love.. finding their way Openly from the workshop...

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2002-03-10 06:28 PM

Munda, you never cease to amaze me. This is beautiful, and you use some great imagery too! You truly are very talented at all forms of poetry. And your pen seems to shine most when it writes of love. Bravo!

Of course, it's a keeper!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Balladeer

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6 posted 2002-03-10 07:12 PM

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

7 posted 2002-03-12 02:26 PM

Thank you all very kindly for your wonderful words.

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