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Whispers to a Poet......
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Whispers to a Poet...... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Take from me, tears found in my eyes Wipe away, the clever disguise Seek answers, lost within my mind Reach me with your heart’s honesty Speak language of tranquility Leaving the façades far behind I need your touch, strength of your hand Convey the connect, understand Not too much, just a word or two Allow me a glimpse, peek inside Share your emote, in soul confide Reveal secrets kept out of view Open your arms, grant me heaven I offer only devotion Or any price you’d have me pay But for one moment genuine A chance for feeling, once again Just for a heartbeat, let me stay I’m in search of sincerity Poet, I need your poetry ~SEA~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Speak language of tranquility Leaving the façades far behind This is what poetry is all about... Very beautifully written, Sue.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, It is the most I have to give, Part of the reason for which I live. Let me write for you that I may share, Thought of my love far beyond compare. Words that exhalt you for your beauty, Words that are shared but not of duty. A poem prepared to soften your heart, That you may open to me from the start. Read my words from my poet lips, As you sway for me your lovely hips. Read of my secret love I hold for you, Now that it's known, hold it close...please do! Everybody thinks of changing humanity and nobody thinks of changing himself. Leo Tolstoy |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lyra~ thank you very much  Larry~ come here Poet...  that was wonderful, thank you!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a poem full of emotion Susan, and if I lived closer I would not only open my heart to that muse of yours, I would give it a bear hug! Nice writing Sea girl The pursuit of truth and beauty is a sphere of activity in which we are permitted to remain children all our lives. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea this is touching...James |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I wouldn't ask you to pay ANY price, nor should any woman have to. My breath is waiting for your own. We should not ever be alone. We've much in common, you agree? Come walk with me beside the sea. I have an angel I hold dear. I often hold her when I fear. A simple drop of rain, that's all, but still, each day, on her, I call. I now call you, you have a choice. I know that you have heard my voice. It's but a whisper, still, it's there. You know how much I truly care. I wrote this sonnet just for you. Each word, you know, I speak is true. See...got me into a writing mood. You're the best, Susan, and a great friend. Thank you for that! Your poem is wonderful! me Stars will shine when I am gone |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
The power of a poet is never ending beauty. This is a piece of artwork that creates a masterpiece. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...this is a jewel of a whisper...I am so very proud of you and especially for this one, when you speak to another in such a tender way... very very well done! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"But for one moment genuine A chance for feeling, once again Just for a heartbeat, let me stay" Ah Susan ... to feel that genuine emotion ... if only for a moment. You've captured this perfectly through these beautiful sentiments. A lovely read. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A true poet will hear your whisper... Nicely done, SEA.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love your wonderful words always just as we all need yours and will continie to share ours with you with all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sea, you write the most beautiful poems. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it. Love the picture also. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA, my poetry is YOUR poetry. I've never written a poem without a SEA in it....or an R or a B or ...etc  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take from me, tears found in my eyes Wipe away, the clever disguise Seek answers, lost within my mind Reach me with your heart's honesty Speak language of tranquility Leaving the façades far behind ===================================== YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS, RIGHT? I am SO digging that rhyme scheme... and the cadence..this was melodic to read aloud...and the intend of inspire is pure poetry. Only another poet can understand the way we crave to feel the words. very very cool write SEA-girlie.  You never knew what I loved in you, |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Circie hi there, NOW this is REAL POETRY, I like this a lot well written and beautiful in it’s melodic way. Well written   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SeaSweetie, this was a sweet read... HighFive2uGurl cuz this poem is splendid... HugsNsmiles2uAlways *~coco~* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Open your arms, grant me heaven I offer only devotion Or any price you’d have me pay But for one moment genuine A chance for feeling, once again Just for a heartbeat, let me stay I’m in search of sincerity Poet, I need your poetry ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sue this is a beautiful work of art. Full of emotion and tenderness. Enjoyed so much. Hugs. ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
come let me enfold if heaven is in my arms it shines in your eyes Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, such a magical whisper. I love the way you said this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, I have not been with Passions but a few months, yet in those months...I have seen your poetry grow tremendously.... Beautifully done lady!!! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
*bump* Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Though written in whispers, this speaks loud and clear. Beautifully written Susan.  |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - Yes, this is what poetry is all about. Well done. Dave |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
SEA...I like this poem very much. I love the twist at the end when you reveal your words are for the Poets who express their innermost thoughts and feelings on paper or a computer screen... ***Ivy Rose |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Words exhaled as beautifully as this can only make beautiful poetry~ *Hugs* for a whisper of loveliness~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awesome write Sea....love it!! Charisma |
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