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Tim
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0 posted 2002-03-10 10:12 PM


As certain as the snows of winter,
...give way to springtime's melt,
I cede to you my heart and soul,
...my passion's ever felt.
You are the splendor of the rose,
...the grandeur of night's skies,
The freshening breath of autumn's breeze,
...the glory of sun's rise.
When I feel your satin skin,
...feel warmth of midnight kiss,
I know how muses from on high,
...can sing of ardour's bliss.
Forever and forevermore,
...I always will be thine,
As certain as the light of day,
...gives way to vespertine.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Ivy Rose
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1 posted 2002-03-10 10:18 PM


What a splendid poem, Tim!!!! Such beautiful, descriptions of the Rose of your heart.  ***Ivy Rose
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2 posted 2002-03-10 10:24 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo lovely, sweet friend, I just know this will forever touch your loves heart every time you read this to her! (smiles) This is a perfect poem for an anniversary or declaration of love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2002-03-10 10:27 PM


this is lovely, Tim, and may your Fair Rose forever bloom in your heart.....enjoyed!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end!
  
    


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4 posted 2002-03-10 10:30 PM


very beautiful words here
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