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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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If the wind could lift me up If the spirits could make me charmed I'd circle the world with saving grace So no one would be harmed. If the sun could melt my fears If the stars could make me shine I'd radiate away all disease So the ailing would be fine. If the moon could light my way If the sea could become land I'd walk across the world to-night And place crystals of ocean in your hand. Chris Barker March 2002 |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
And a better world it would be. Beautiful thoughts, Chris. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
These _are_ beautiful thoughts, and shared in the same way, and if your heart tells you what to write, then I'd say that it, is beautiful too. Thanks. *Peace. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it, Chris! Beautiful loving thoughts, beautifully written. Thanks for the library present.  May the ripple of LOVE |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I wish it could and I wish you would. lovely nightshade. floria Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
If only such magnificent wishes came ture...Very well done..I love it..**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Duncan - Thankyou for reading and commenting on my little installment to-day. Spitfire - Awww, how sweet. Thanks. Midnitesun - Thankyou for honouring my poem by placing it in your library. Floria - I wish I could too dear. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Startime - If wishes came true! Yes, it would be wonderful. Thanks for reading. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words of love always make me smile, and I know deep in my heart wishes can come true as long as you nurture them! (kiss on cheek) May these wishes of true love forever come true for you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah - Thankyou sweetie. Once again your caring words have made me smile. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If the moon could light my way If the sea could become land I'd walk across the world to-night And place crystals of ocean in your hand. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chris, I know you so well...and I also know if it were possible you would do this! What a beautiful soul you have....this piece is lovely! Love ya, miss ya, Teed.  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I like this so much, such a beautiful wish. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
NancyLee - Yes, you know I would at least try...then stamp my foot if I couldn't ..lol...thanks Teed...hugs!! Sandra - thankyou for reading and commenting..it means alot to me. Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
Chris I like this one nice job! christine |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Chris....I enjoy IF poems, have written a few but I don't believe I have written one as nice as this one is....thank you for it!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Christine!! Thankyou Magnus - Thankyou for the compliment - I appreciate it! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
vandana - thankyou!! Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the sentiments here are wonderful and I enjoyed this very much! |
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