Open Poetry #19 |
Tropical Dream |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I've walked the beach watching sunset in glorious hues I cannot describe, but still feel With burning intensity, as the tide came in washing with gentle laps the traces of foot prints left from passing lovers playing children Now I sit in darkened room with cold frosting panes watching fireplace flicker dancing shadows reminding me of swaying tropical palms without the warmth longing for days and nights wrapped in breezes and your arms So I'll dream of the shore tonight hoping the waves gentle ebb and the tides relentless pull will cleanse this burning ache for you and those days of desire from the shores of my heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a bit different from your normal fare, but still a delightful treat... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ron, the ache is so clear, so painful....but this is such an excellent write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Being with one you love changes the way everything looks. You show us the summer and the winter of the heart with this poem. I wish you love! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done! Perfect play of words begining to end carrying the flow of multiple emotions start to finish coherently and wonderfully. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was lovely..i can feel the breeze of the palms and hear the waves upon the shore...Enjoyed Ron ~Victoria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
many emotions here indeed. . . all seeming to come together along that shore. . . well done . . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautifully written, Captain, deeply touching... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) Oh Ron, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your yearning and I pray that soon love will again touch your heart and hold your hand in paradise! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you have all the write words..I meant right *s to touch the heart of your readers with. ~smiling at the loveliness of this one M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this one just aches, Ron! Very very well written and much enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Sometimes all you really wish for... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Exquisite bit of romance, Cpat! Great to take time to read you again. Enjoyed this one, per usual. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely, Cap'n Ron... You'll get me every time with tales of romance and the sea... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, the true birth of romance comes from the sea. And the palm trees, well, they are a close second. This is beautiful. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reached out and grabbed me...James |
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