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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-02-16 12:18 PM

Do the petals of your heart?
feel like a blue morning glory
craving the lips of the sun
a sweet kiss of moistened dew
delicious rain of rejuvenating hues
wilting petals of a once bouquet
slowly wilting in eyes of the dark
listening for violins to embark
drifting upon fragrant winds
in search of tenderness
Do the petals of your heart?
feel like a blue morning glory
in a blue raging river of drought
drowning within a blossom of a wish

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-16 12:21 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, such tenderness always fill your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-16 12:27 PM

Oh gosh....YES...how did you know...mmmmm thank you for putting into words for me...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-02-16 01:12 PM

Sometimes...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-16 01:15 PM

Victoria, can I just say, 'yes, and I really enjoyed this!'
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2002-02-16 01:28 PM

Morning Glory is indeed a good analogy for my heart! Grinning now, have you ever tried to remove a Morning Glory, or even keep it confined to one area? Laughing, it just keeps growing and growing...

Love this.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-02-16 03:18 PM

thank you dear Noah..always love your
sweet and kind comments

thank you karen..i guess because im a woman

thank you james..yes im sure you have dear james

nancy...thank you so much hon and im glad you enjoyed hugs

thank you serenity...no i dont think i have tried that ha..

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

7 posted 2002-02-16 05:16 PM

Each word is exquisitely melded into the other to create a delicate but alluring beauty. So very nicely done Victoria! It just floats through your mind.

Sincerely,
Regina

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-02-16 05:35 PM

I really loved the delicacy of this one, Victoria....as well as the beautiful imagery.

I especially loved these lines

Do the petals of your heart?
feel like a blue morning glory
in a blue raging river of drought
drowning within a blossom of a wish

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2002-02-16 06:40 PM

I do so enjoy the entwining of this...well done!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-16-2002 06:41 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-16 06:41 PM

Blue morning glories are even more beautiful when you write of them Victoria, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2002-02-16 07:54 PM

thank you very much Sunshine ...im happy you enjoyed

floria..thank you..nice of you to say

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-02-16 08:20 PM

Perfectly colorful, flowing, and I think I say yes to it. Though "he" would not.
Sandra

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2002-02-16 09:10 PM

thank you regina..i appreciate your kind comments

thank you madame as always

thank you sandra..and for peeking in

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

14 posted 2002-02-16 09:19 PM

Hey Vic! mmmmm good......!!
I like the analogy of how we wither, our flower-hearts stay closed,
immune
until sparked by a glowing rain
then shimmer in glory

awesome gurl! as always!
JF

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-02-16 11:07 PM

thank you Jeff..and im glad you are back again..i didnt think you would be that easy to get rid of haa..

~Vic

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

16 posted 2002-02-17 12:48 PM

I loved the use of your metaphors in this one and the relation to human feelings and actions. Great poem Victoria.

Light tomorrow with today!
~* Elizabeth Barrett Browning *~

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

17 posted 2002-02-17 01:14 AM

Victoria,
I was in first grade when I discovered blue morning glories. I thought they were delightful and so is this poem!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

18 posted 2002-02-17 09:18 AM

thank you Sharon..always nice to hear from you..hugs

Larry..thank you very much..wow you have a good memory..thank you for peeking in

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